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for Slave

by DragonellDeatheye

person Qiana
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love this
person Qiana
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon I live this
person Saminada
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Awesome update!!! I loved it all!!! Dorian sounds pretty lovely! While the King sounds damn HOT! W00T!! :D

I hope that somehow, and someday, they'll be able to have a real relationship! They would make and hot couple! LOL

I'm getting far ahead right?? ;;

Anyways, thanks alot for the story!! And plz, write moooooore soon! I can't wait! *hugs*
person MissMiki
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eekks! the king is a bit harsh...haha are he and Kahn related/?
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Dorian. What kind of punishment will he get from the king?
I want to know more...pls
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, I´m so happy that you are back
person Ann10550
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I would like to know what happens to Damien
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like your back. First of all, my condolences on your loss. I know the feeling. Lost my father to alzheimers in 2004, one brother in Feb of 2007 to heart disease and my mother's sister and only sibling also in July of 2007 from stomach cancer. As you can see death is no stranger to my family.

For someone who is afflicted with dyslexia you do pretty well in your writing. Kudos!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.


schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I´m so sorry. I thanked for another upload right after I saw it on the main list of stories that there is a something new - I thought that it was new upload. Later I found out that it was a note about the sad occasion
in your family so I wanted to remove my previous review - however the button I pressed removed even the review I wrote before. I understand how do you feel now - in my family there was the death recently too.
My deepest sympathies.

I really like your story and for the next chapter I will wait as long as needed.
person Saminada
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry for your lost! I hope you'll feel better soon!

I can't wait to read more of this story! :D And I wonder what the future holds for dear Dorian! ;;

Anyways, thanks alot for the story! update whenever u'll feel better pretty plz! *hugs*