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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the premise was entirely believable. It's more coercion than non-con--he acquiesces to Mark, a guy he knows he shouldn't really trust, but he almost can't help himself. And the run-on sentences weren't annoying--ha, I have a problem with them too *grin*
Anyway I liked the fic.
Anyway I liked the fic.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story - punchy and fast paced. Only a tiny 'but' - except that I nearly missed that it was the old guy in the next stall doing the rear-entry stuff... had to reread it to make sure... (that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it)... Really entertaining read though. Thanks. 'Purr