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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!eep!
And the plot thickens!
This is amazing, the characters are great and
the storyline is like a breath of fresh air.
Wonderful!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Don't keep us waiting too long! :)
And the plot thickens!
This is amazing, the characters are great and
the storyline is like a breath of fresh air.
Wonderful!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Don't keep us waiting too long! :)
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update again soon.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story you should definatly have mroe reviews.
I was wondering some of the scentences repeat in the story .
Is that suposed to be liek that?
anyway update soon <3
I was wondering some of the scentences repeat in the story .
Is that suposed to be liek that?
anyway update soon <3
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is special in brings new elements in to the light. I can say this is the best one yet.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your are getting better and better.
this is a great chapter.
this is a great chapter.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg I absolutly love this story, I hope you keep updating it. ^-^
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe Now what wil icey do XD Great update thanks!!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great i very well writen.But try to focus more details on the character. Like: Do they have horns, How does thier ears look like.(Usualy is a pointy ear) The color of the hair.What kind of clothes they have (you have to say they have none.) and things like that.
This a alomost a masterpiece with a little more atention to details it could be perfect.
The idea is original. You have a great potential.
This a alomost a masterpiece with a little more atention to details it could be perfect.
The idea is original. You have a great potential.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you updated so soon.Only great writes do that.And you are on the way of becoming one of them.
This chapter was better than the last.
how you showed what they felt was incedible.
please update soon.
This chapter was better than the last.
how you showed what they felt was incedible.
please update soon.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very ineresting begining :D
Those two are bound to fight ne XD please update again soon.
Those two are bound to fight ne XD please update again soon.