rate_review Reviews

I really like this fanfic!!! Its really interesting and fun to read. And I would really like to read more :)

At first, I must say, the grammar was a little bad :( I had to re-read a few parts to understand it well. But I decided to keep reading because I really liked what I was reading. And I can see that you are improving :) As chapters go by it becomes better. But let me tell you, I have seen worse fanfics. O_O So bad, that I had to stop reading :S Yours its good, just a few mistakes. But don't worry, I won't stop reading it! I really really like it ^___^

Until the next chapter! :)

this story shows more and more great potential. But i think you need a beta. I need one too when i started to write stories.

Still there is one thing i can't understand when they first met, why didn't A. used the special ice on Y.

Did his instict stoped him, because he felt Y. is something special?

oh very nice i cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon. ^_^

A. want to look cold but he is not. I also wonder why A. didn't killed Y. whem they first met?


this is a turn point chapter,no?

You said "Aatu jumped Yaot cause we was feeling horny after slaying (killing ) so many humans."

I HOPE he kills a few more hundred.

I love the idea with the rings on his tail to bad they don't have bells atached. I bet that would drive A. crazy.

i adore this story.
so original.
aatu is such a cool charachter even though i can't wait for him to show some affection to poor yaot.

this is the most intersting story of this genre that i've read in all years aff has been working.
you have to keep writting.
too fgood to stop reading.
more.
more.
i can't belive i was so lazy not to leave a review.
thi sbeautiful story and so little reviews.
it deserves at least hundred!

(Shiny eyes) this was perfect. My favorite chapter so far. YOUr truly wonderful

I can;t wait to see a jelour ice Demon hehe I'm so excited now.

Is kinda suprizing that Yaot(I fergot the spelling) is bottem.

It makes the story less predictable though is supper cool

<3

To bad they Y. didn't tried some Viagra.

A new mate. I think is possible for Y. not to be the last. And another one of his kind could have been in the human word.

But how come A.jumped him.He didn't want to admit that he likes ...XXX with Y>

What in the world happen to this chapter? Why are some sentences keep repeating over and over and were went the space between the pararaphes??? I am talkng about the midle of the chaper that is were this problems are.

I love this chaper but please try to fix the error from the midle of the chapter.

I can't beleve A. has so much control over himself. I hope Y. jumps him again real soon.