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Well, you made me cry. Takes talent to do that to a reader. I found myself becoming panicky as Kyo's time was coming to an end. Very good writing.

Aw this is so sad!! I'm crying like hell!!!! Poor Shinta!! This story probably takes place before the escort. It's so damn sad!! But I like it non the less!!!! But it is not quite as good as the escort it is still a very nice side fic, but too sad!!!! But I'm happy that Kyo had a wonderfull last week!!! Everyone should have such a brother!! Thanks for this nice sidefic!!

Black Heaven is an exclusive escort service with a motto of bringing the dreams of their clients into reality. Shinta was hired by Akito to do just that for Kyo. This story is an off shot of another story I have posted here The Escort. In a way I guess Kyo was used but in his circumstances it was unlikely he would have found a lover in his time that he had left. Akito sacrifice spend the finally weeks with his brother so Kyo could spend it with someone who if didn’t love him was willing to give him something close to the experience as he was likely to get.

*bawling eyes out* . . . touching

littleolmee
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Well...well...
Terribly depressing, especially since now we know what Shinta actually is, and how he'll have to go forever without someone. I'm just making assumptions, but I think this is placed chronologically after The Escort, and far enough after that Koji is dead.
I think this one is actually much better written than your original, but maybe that's because it actually elicited an emotional response from me - I'm not known for getting teary-eyed over what I read.
Again, you've got phrase repetition, and it's the same one: "It was long before".
Other than that...
I'm adding this to recommended reading, I think.