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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
Hi, Crimson Nightshade,
I absolutely love this story. Dragon was an excellent piece of writing. However, Dragon and Dragon's Mate would be better off as a one continuous story, not two. Dragon made me really like Jaidyn, and then he was killed. The last paragraph of the story sort of looked like an opening for another similar story, where Drago will go on and kill another boy. That put me off and I hesitated to read the sequel.
The sequel was a big surprize and is very interesting so far. Completely different from what I assumed it would be. I like everything about it and want to know how this Karura problem will get resolved :)
Like it a lot!
Hi, Crimson Nightshade,
I absolutely love this story. Dragon was an excellent piece of writing. However, Dragon and Dragon's Mate would be better off as a one continuous story, not two. Dragon made me really like Jaidyn, and then he was killed. The last paragraph of the story sort of looked like an opening for another similar story, where Drago will go on and kill another boy. That put me off and I hesitated to read the sequel.
The sequel was a big surprize and is very interesting so far. Completely different from what I assumed it would be. I like everything about it and want to know how this Karura problem will get resolved :)
Like it a lot!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why Yuya's denying the bond?-thanks for the update!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i would love if there was some way for me to know when you update your stories. this one is getting very interesting. i am also reading requiem and gravedigger. i read when i have free time at work as a means of escape. thanks for providing that escape. keep writing. take care!
soubi1963@aol.com
soubi1963@aol.com
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is really good. But I still can't get over the fact he loves the person that killed him OO.
Lol I was hoping he would find ways to torture him but that is a different story.
Your story is great though :)
Lol I was hoping he would find ways to torture him but that is a different story.
Your story is great though :)
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent story! i like how the main character is debating with himself over the morality of his death and Drago!
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come now most young people think, it more fun with your pants off...Crimson Kiddo, But for you, since your continuing the story with my favorite boy...I will endeavor to to keep my pants on a little longer... just for you! Luv, G
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*~mm, the plot thickens >w< very interesting~*
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with your writing style. It is eloquent, exquisite, alluring, but most of all captivating! It draws the reader in and makes them their prisoner. You have without a doubt made me a slave to your story. So please Master, give me more chapters.
~Brazen~
~Brazen~
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo Hurry up give, My dude, substance Soon... at least, so he can haunt his murderer, properly and thoroughly, Dragon Boy deserves it! before he surrcums to his normal lusts. Green eyes MMMmmmmmmmmmmnnn, does that mean, my boy, is in the process of becoming more than he was??? Yeah give me substance you hear....NOW!!!
G, a little less mad than I was before LOL
G, a little less mad than I was before LOL
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want Jaiden back... Kicks Draco/Ryu etc. Maybe the pendant can help??? I like it and hope you continue. Want to see what happens next