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April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first two chapters. I hope you're continuing this, because it's rather difficult to find a story with darkness and actual plot online. Also, there's that sense of realism in the emotions, especially Justin's, and I'm a big fan of realistic emotions.
Besides, how often does a story start out with an immortal prisoner? I love plot twists.
There are a few errors here and there, but those are all minor, from what I recall off the top of my head.
A very good start, I have to say. Please continue this? I'm not asking for immediate updates, or even frequent updates (however much I might enjoy them, if I'm not on the road). I just want to read more of this.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
Besides, how often does a story start out with an immortal prisoner? I love plot twists.
There are a few errors here and there, but those are all minor, from what I recall off the top of my head.
A very good start, I have to say. Please continue this? I'm not asking for immediate updates, or even frequent updates (however much I might enjoy them, if I'm not on the road). I just want to read more of this.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It may be a cliche, but well written and clever cliches are always welcome to readers.
I like what you have so far, so definitely keep going. I await your next update with much anticipation!
~kitty
I like what you have so far, so definitely keep going. I await your next update with much anticipation!
~kitty