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for Room 209

by Chamomile

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hi, i was wondering if u were planning on continuing this?
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Take this from a college student, I only wish a fantasy like this would happen to me!
The mystery was hot, the sex hotter!
Great job here!
XOXO
person LustfulLuna
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I thought that the story was a great one. I love poetry and the Shakespearean style of romance. I really do. The love notes were a great touch. But I knew right away that it was Damian that would be meeting here. It WAS rather obvious. But the details seemed to be in short supply. But, all over, I would give this a 3 out of 5.
I do look forward to reading more.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is wonderful! I love this so far, it is so well written! I wish I could write like that... I guess I'll just have to keep on practicing, huh? By the way, thank you so much for reviewing my story! I will deffinetly be sure to keep on reading yours! Keep up the awesome work! :)
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is really good so far, although ist your first story....keep going!
person Linece
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, you should continue.
It was really good. ♥
Hot sex but not vulgar, fun and loveable characters. =)
I would like to read more. ;)
person lovelyl
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damien is sounding more like Darien, clean and tidy and it would not surprise me that Darien was into a little bondage too. Hang on I will ring Darien and find out. LOL. Keep going....
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, hot story. It's really great. I would love to see another chapter with more BDSM.
person lovelyl
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Someone likes Sailor Moon? Serena and Damien? Damien sounds a bit like Darien?
That was good, very hot. More please. :D
person SOE
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Certainly one of the better stories I've read. Well done.

Will hope for a continuation.