rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to say thanks for a fucking awesome story. When I started I didn't expect to read something that was this well written and emotionally in depth. I'd rarely run into a villain who enjoyed being cruel in a way that actually felt impactful. I'd never read a betrayal as hurtful to me the reader as Ashley's. With this story I came for the smut and stayed for the plot. Thanks again for the spectacular read.

This chapter was rather over the top. I think you tried too hard making this insane scenario go deeper than it needed to. Then again, with the premise for the plot, I supposed something like that had to be put in.

STill, a very interesting fuck fic.

Later!

I'm sorry to say that this story was written in 2005 and probably won't be continued...I put it here just for the sake of completion. Thanks for the kind words, though. It's been so long since I worked on this story that going back and finding the thread is almost impossible now. At most, I'll leap forward into the future and do some stories with the same characters. ^_^