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This was a very creative punishment. Oh I kind of feel sorry for Nick. He takes a lot of Vincent's crap but I have to say that he takes it well, ok as well as he can given his situation. Vincent might love him but I doubt Nick feels that love right now. I can only imagine how uncomfortable a chasity belt must feel. I felt uncomfortable for Nick just reading about it. I have to admit it was funny to wake up and find yourself in one of those, only would this happen to Nick.
I'll keep in mind of other ways of punishment and I'll let you know of the ones I come up with.
Another great chapter. Can't wait for your next update...looking forward to it!

OH MY, Vinnie is making sure that NOBODY gets that a$$:p Oh hiya, Misty. Just finished reading another great chappie. To your message at the end, all I have to say is this: BRING IT ALL! Bring the angst, the humor, the tortureness...(the toy that Vincent gave Nick. Whoo,I know that had to hurt. Sounds painful.)Oh dang I just went off cue, where I was at, oh yeah, DEFINITELY bring the sex, more importantly, Raynor's and Vincent past. I love Logan and Connor. They go in hand-in-hand. They also come off to me as(correct if I am wrong)the type of couple that would just do IT anywhere. Thank you so much for answering my question. Like you, Raynor really fit, well...Raynor. If you are considering doing a foursome, let a chick know. I have to be prepared, you know large cup of ice, a fan. Something to keep a girl's blood from boiling over;)Anyway, great chappie and as always, looking forward to reading more. Read you laters.

Smile:)~CD~

wow...Vincent has some major communication issues.....I'm waiting for the chapter where Nick just snaps and plunges a stake into Vincent's chest....or at least wraps him up in ducttape!!!

Again just when I thought I was on top of it I missed another ch so this is a two-for. Ch 3 was awesome and the ending was suspenseful. The mystery of slate eyes was revealed. However I had to cringe a bit when Nick started to run instead of facing the wrath of Vinny. I mean it reminded me of when I was a kid in trouble with my mother. Nothing good ever came from running, believe me. Ch 4 explained a lot but let so much more to discover. I mean thee is still the mystery of what Vinny did that was so bad but it would seem not bad enough to warrant killing him outright. I mean if his cousin was that mad why was he toying with him? Also Connor and Logan are an interesting addition. I didn't expect Logan to get down and dirty on the dance floor so quickly. LOL! I think he has found a kindred spirit in Nick. And you said there was a possibility of foursome, I think that is a good idea. You know what they say, sharing is caring!

Yeah it sounds like Nick has got a world of pain coming his way...but really this wasn't his fault...well not entirely...How Nick manages to get into these situations...LOL...I'm guessing Vincent will dish out a little pain but I'm hoping there is at least some pleasure...I guess it depends on how Vincent is feeling :)...Let's just hope Nicky doesn't go blind this time. Great chapter...can't wait for the next one!

Nice twist? Girl, that was a hell-a-good twist:) Loved it. So basically Raynor(Nice name by the way. Where did you get his name from?) is, like, in a way Vincent's doppelganger. Excellent. That little conversation between Vincent and Raynor, HAD ME CRACKING UP. I can tell I'm am so going to like their little sarcastic-like or smart ass remarks to one another. As for Nick...he is...what can I say...oh, got it. That boy is going to be in some deep *bleep*. Makes the story even more intersting. So you know I am tuned in this ALL the way. Looking forward to reading more soon. Read you laters.

Smile :) ~CD~

Sorry, this part of the chappie just stuck out at me. "They fought wildly with their fangs and nails, scratching, biting and tearing pieces of their flesh out in the process". When I read this part I was thinkin this was more like a vampiric cat fight than anything else XDlol!! No offense or anything, it just made me laugh that's all, loved the chappie though ^_^!

You say this chappie is boring, but it's not. It just made the story so much more awesome than it already was getting. Now I'm obviously curious about this Raynor character you've introduced us to, and what role he plays in the future =D.

What a cliffie...something tells me that Nick won't be feeling to well after all of these festivities. Vincent's cousin...wow he seems to take things without asking (just like Vincent). Kinda feel bad for Nick who is caught in the middle, but I'm sure he has survived worse. Fun chapter...can barely wait for the next one.

WHOA, HOLD ON! A girl have to step back for a second. Vincent's cousin. I truly did not see that coming. It all makes sense now I think about it. Because why, while I was reading this...for some odd reason the whole time I'm reading about Mr. Mystery, I was thinking "This man reminds of Vincent a little bit." It was just the little things. Like how Vincent managed to capture Nick,like his cousin he just sat and watched. Pure genius:)Oh, and thank you for the shout-out! And as always, always looking forward to the next chapter. Read you laters.

Smile:) Celestial Devine