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oh please oh please update soon i can't wait!

I like the sequel, but it's kind of depressing. Nick is always getting into trouble, and punished. Vincent, Logan, and Conner are so nasty to him. I like it, but at the same time it kind of leaves a weird feeling in me. I mean, Vincent still treats him like a whore, and he never listens to him. All he really does do is torture Nick. I kind of wish that he wasn't always such a bastard, because it seems like he really doesn't love Nick.Otherwise it's good. I really enjoy your story, and will continue to read it!
Until your next installment,
Jades

Great Ch. I loved the kiss sleep scene, it was just too adorable.

OMG, all the horrors that await Nick XD! Love it, and as for writing chappies if thats what you meant, I'd probably end up with a chappie full of errors. Writing was my worst subject in school, but oh I have these wonderful few ideas for stories if I was a writer. But if I remember correctly when finally down on paper I look at it and realize...it's total crap! Makes me happy that you ask me though, makes me sad that I don't have the talent to write such awesome stories like you do ^_^;.

Well Misty, I thank you for even suggesting that I could possibly write on your brilliant work. I will definitely think about and if my creative juices start to flow I'll send what I come with your way to possibly add on to a chapter or even future chapters.
Great work on this chapter. It seems that yes, Nick does take a little pleasure from pissing off Victor and from the punishment Victor gives him. If Victor does in fact love him, it would be nice to start to see some of that love start to show, I'm sure Nick would appreciate it also.
As far as this new punishment he is about to receive from Victor while the others join and watch...It seems Nick would be hesitate and frightened because last time a group wanted to punish him, they really did harm him both physically and mentally. Now might be a good time for Nick to experience some kind of flashback and possible a breakdown. It's only so much I think he can handle at a time and something like this might just push him over. This might set up for Victor to show Nick a little patience and tenderness, and possible love.
Just a few of my ideas...not trying to step on any toes...while the punishment/pleasure is great to read...I do miss moments were Nick is vulnerable from the prequel.
Anywho...great chapter...can't wait for your next update.

Wow! I don't know what it was, but this chapter was soooooooooo damn enticing that it took my mind and literally blew it away. I agree with you 100% that Connor and Logan are great assest. They are more than just great, they're wonderful. And I am so glad you add them:) I would love to read how Logan and Connor came to be. Sounds very exciting. Hell, the way Logan acts, I bet Connor had to get that boy out of worlds of trouble. Speaking of trouble, Nick and Logan, man, they are some funny troublemakers. Especially after reading the little notation. I am sitting on my chair just laughing thinking on what was on their minds. But for now, all I can say is...(forgive me I'm smirking on this part)"Niiiiick...ooh,Nick" >;P Anyway, great chapter and as always, looking forward to the next, needless to say tormentfully fun chapter. Read you laters.

Smile:) ~CD~

LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE

I'm so flattered to be ask if I wanted to be your beta, it makes me so happy ^-^! But I'm afraid I must respectfully decline, Because I have absolutely zero experience in the beta department ^_^;. I mean I didn't even quite know what a beta was, I had to look it up (courtesy to wikipedia) >__<), so far I don't think there's anything wrong with it that needs correcting =D! As for the Connor/logan story, I think thats a great idea, and think you should proceed with it after the MBF sequel story :)

Sorry, I had written alot more in the review above this one. But it keeps cutting my reviews in half >:O! Why is that, do you know why?

OMG, it seems like forever I last tune in, my computer had to be fix >_