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It's true, it's has been a long time since the last update. But I never quite gave up hope for an update someday. Maybe life just got in the way like it does to us all :). I just didn't check everyday like I did before, but I'm glad I checked today though. I really liked the newest chappie and hope that means you'll start updating this story a little more often. I hate to see a good story go on hiatus or worse abandoned.

I loved the interplay between all of your characters in both of your stories. I especially liked the exchanges between Logan and Nicholas in these past two chapters. Even though Logan seems like he is Nick's best friend, I have to wonder just what is going on upstairs with him? First he's friendly, next he's molesting and then he's tormenting too far. Though I think that part of that from being a fledgling for about thirty years, but part of that has to be him. I did like the payback scene for Nick. So keep it up and I hope to soon see what you've got up your sleeves when it comes to your awesome secret that lays between them.

enjoyable a good read

aww! well i hope that u start wrting again soon, but I will definitely keep my eyes on this for sure! luv these two so much!

can Nicholaus feel truly happy for once? i kinda feel distressed >_<
cheers
p.s. doing a great job with the plot ^_^ !

lol i agree with brokenangelwings, and poor Nick is just so cute, i love more it and more with every new chapter, Cant wait to read the next

Wow! this is one of the best stories i have read in a long time! I would say poor Nick...but i think he likes getting into trouble! That Logan's so bad but you know we'd all like to have a go at 'punishing' Nick :D

god you are poor evil you know that? how can you stop at a place like this? and than telling what will come... :( but I do think Nick has some kind of problems with his ego or something like that. Why should Vincent do this many things just to harm him? He really should think more logical, right know he is just plain stubborn i suppose. please please update soon!!!

I've just stumbled upon your story yesterday while perusing various other originals and have finished reading it only earlier. It's a very intriguing story with a semi-cliche plotline that never seems to get old for me. Your characters are colorful and the situations you place them in are hilarious at times and very touching and gut-wrenching at others.

I must say that you are a very talented writer and, although you have a few grammar mistakes here and there and your chapters are somewhat short, you portray the world you've created in quite a stunning manner. It is easy for me to imagine everything everyone is doing in your story and, not once, have I noticed that you've 'forgotten' a character. I, myself, am somewhat prone to forgetting characters and end up haphazardly tossing them back in the story later on.

I am looking forward to more of this story and hope you continue it as you please.

-Sei

I like it! Looking forward to more.