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for My Beloved Fledgling

by DNight

person Anon
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't be cruel and please write more, it's very naughty of you leaving us in the lurch like this, and i adore this story so very much so i hope you or someone else decides to write more about my favorite vampires.
person snowleopard
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am sad it's over and wish you the best of luck!

This is such a good story and it's too bad you ended it like this. Nicholas and Logan will survive to
live another day and I will be waiting for them.

person Will Treaty
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the top 10 best vampire male slash stories on AFF and am disappointed you have discontinued it. I fell in love with Nick and learned to love Vincent too even though he was arrogant. I think the chemistry between them was really great. Please don't end it like this and I know they will survive and cause more trouble for the Sires.

Amazing job and well done,

W. T.
person slaveneko
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW its not that we arent here at least for me i was wating for action or a plot it was a bit of smut for a few chapter i was wathing to see where would the plot go, but at leats i been patience please please more give us more
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

I am sorry I have never reviewed your story and apologize for being lazy.

I really was enjoying this story very much and am sad it's over. I just love Nick's attitude and his new friend Logan is such a trouble maker. I will miss it and am sorry you are not continuing with it.

I am hoping that Nick and Logan jumped off the bike before it went over the edge.

Please reconsider and continue with it since I believe it would be a great waste of talent on your part.

Good Luck!

person Morgan le Fay
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! No! You just can't end it like that and not expect to get angry reviewers chasing after you!
Nick can't be dead (He's already dead anyway, isn't he?) and besides that Vincent has to punish him
for sneaking out with Logan.

person Talltree-san
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Motorcycle huh? I would think this is a good opportunity to escape for Nick. At least I think it is ^_^;.
person RJaneyP
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rename it "Kinky Badboy Kindergarden Kiddies Vs the Vampires"... its surprising the way you make bondage and S&M acts just so positively CUTE that just I want scream! These Vamp Sires have the patience of JOB...even with whips and chains... they can't keep these bad boys in line, but at least your Vamps don't twinkle in the sun light, which is disgusting. CAn't waite to see what they're up and into next! G
person Talltree-san
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not meeting our expectations? I don't know about everyone else but I loved the newest update. Just came back from my nephew's birthday party (he turned one today ^-^!). And this is just what I needed to end the day just right, a new chappie, thank you!
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
New reader here... I really love ur story and hope you'll continue..