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Happy 2013! I hope the New Year sees you writing more chapters to your vamp stories, pretty please.

Hi, I was just reviewing some other stories and decided to check yours. I hope your feeling better now but guess not well enough to write. I hope someday you find a beta and don't forget to go check out the forum because I saw two responses to your beta request post from awhile ago. I wish you could find time to continue writing. Take care and good luck with stuff.

I am so sorry to read that you were in the hospital and hope you are feeling better and it's nothing serious! I am so relieved that they survived the crash was really worried about that. Raynor is a very fascinating character and I can't wait to find out more about his past with Vincent. I think Logan and Nick are going to be in some serious trouble BUT what else is new? I don't think Vincent or Connor will be to happy with them espeically when Connor finds out his priced motorcycle has been destroyed, LOL.

I am so happy this story is being continued and look forward to reading your version of it. I just wished the chapters were a tiny bit longer but will read anything new at this point in story! Thanks!

I was so happy to see story listed under latest that I squealed with joy. Now, I know you need a beta so was wondering did you check the forum, and if you have, did you ever check back to see if anyone responsed to your post? I think you seriously do need a beta to help you out with your writing. This chapter has potention but it seems like you jumped into it and it could have been more descriptive. I think if you look it over you could fix the minor spelling/gramar issues. If you have spell-check that might help you too. Oh, did you know Nick has dark brown hair not blonde? There is a description of him and Vincent in the first chapter (right at the top)so you might want to double check it. Ok, Raynor is going to cause trouble and Vincent will be seriously pissed off. Thanks for finally updating and be sure to keep it up!

Hi, tis me again, with some important info about a potential Beta for your stories. I checked the forum under the section about Betas and saw you had requested one awhile ago. Did you know two people have answered you? They are Shadowspale and BlackMaiden and they left contact info for you so you might want to go check it out and see what they said. I think you need their help so hop to it kid!

I am so happy this story has been adopted and given a second chance at life! It was sad when the original writer gave up on it but sometimes that happens though.

Seriously, don't you ever read you're reviews, like at all?! Is this story still a WIP or is it discontinued or is it just abandonded?! It's been like forever since you last updated and I am very disappointed. You've been lucky to have so many hits/ratings/reviews but you'll probably lose whoever was following it because they will have forgotten about it, or be dead, or too old to read it by the time you decide to get back to writing it. I am so frustated about this. It happens everytime I get hooked on something good, grrrr...............

Why isn't this story being continued if it's once again a WIP? I noticed you are the new author of this story but have been for over three months and still nothing. Maybe, you should give it back to original author so it can be put back up as completed since you don't seem interested in writing it anyway.

Well, I hope you know that the waiting is killing me and I think we (or at least I) have suffered enough, don't you? It's been a slow and agonzing long wait. Would you please put up a story progess note on your author page letting us know when to expect updates or the reason for the delay?