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I am so disappointed... I really really like the first story but i wonder what happened? I love how despite vincent is a major asshole, he will never let anyone touch nick but now i dont know what to think about this... I assume that you just adopted this story but you really ruined it... Hope you do a better job next time...

DNight,

Please don't take this the wrong way but I hope someone else reading this saga will offer to help you beta or co-write it with you. You seem to be taking a totally different direction from the way original author, Misty Moonlight, was writing it. Which is alright since you adopted it from her but it seems to me you are just not interested or invested in the characters that we have learned to love and hate. I wish you would take the time to check out the forum and try to find someone there to help you out with this before it's too late.

If anyone reading this does want to adopt it from you, be sure to contact the moderators so they can be sure both stories are transferred to your author panel along with all the reviews/ratings so you don't lose them.

I hope someone is interested because it would be a waste of two great stories.

Congrats for butchering what was once a fun story to read. How old are you anyway? You are not even trying to do this story justice but make a mockery out of the original concept. I hope someone adopts it or you give it back to the original author because you have made a mess of it. You should go back and read the previous chapters and the original story to get your facts straight.

Oh it's getting even better! Can't wait for the next chappie!

Won't you please update this totally addicting story? I cannot wait to continue on this exciting journey....

I noticed you haven't updated in ages and was wondering is this discontinued? If not, maybe you could find a co-writer and beta to help you move it along and give you motivation. I am saddened it seems to be in limbo.

What happens next...need to know...update please!!!! Awesome story btw.

please update, please update, please update....getting soooooooo good!

I am confused myself like Nick. But I'm curious to see how this will play out, and how the relationship between Nick and Vincent will change.

I don't mean any harm by stating this but I've been totally confused while reading the last three chapters you have written. Would you please try and find someone who can help you edit this. Did you take the time to go back and read the original story, plus the first 11 chapters of this sequel, to acquaint yourself with the characters and what has already happened in it? I think it has potential but you need to work on it a bit more and get someone to help you. What happened to Logan? Raynor is acting like a deranged lunatic or mad scientist. I went back and read the part where he made his first appearance and it seems to me like something happened in his and Vincent's past to cause this hate and friction between them. Why don't you work on that aspect of story instead of just making it seem like he's a madman? What happened between Raynor & Vincent to change? I like this story but right now it's rather taken a totally wrong turn.