rate_review Reviews

This was really goo, but I didn't like that Laidyn died at the end. I really liked him and that just sucked! The story was good though, and well written.

Thanks for posting!

Ahhhh thanks for understanding my stupidity Tachi! As for the car you could of looked it up online. Im pretty sure it has an oh shit handle, but I am not all that sure about the seat reclining. Either was yet another good story and I look forward to more.

*~wow. that was just. wow. amazing, captivating and just wow. Though, the end seem to just pop out unexpectedly...but that was probably what you were aiming for ^_^ very nice piece!~*

Loved it, up to the end. It was a great sexy build-up to a sad and disapointing downer.
I liked Jaidyn, he was better than simple fodder, I think he deserved better than being tossed away like discarded garbage! He was the main focus of your story...to kill him off was absolutely devastating.

To me the story had a lot more potential to be realized from both Jaidyn and the Dragon/Dragons...Ending the story here was ruthlessly wasteful and I didn't like it one bit...in fact it was down right mean and nasty!
Flaming breath of G, you make me want to load my gun and take aim!
PS... feel honored, your the first I have ever gave a negative review to...ever, How dare you kill him.

I liked this. Very good! Applause for you.