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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a such a well written story, i've reviewed before, i think, but it was a while since i read this story. and im happy to see that you updated. i like how its not the typical cliche plot where both fall heads over heels and have sex all over the place. this is much more sensible and i like it more. this seems to be the beginning of a true love story, im very impressed by how well you write :D
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really happy that you updated, I had given up hope and so hadn't checked this story in a while. I can't wait for the next chapter, oh yeah and I think you should have Cynthia hit Jason. Really hard.
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories... All of them I want so badly to see more of them I will do something I rarely do... I want to beta YOUR work. You have amazing ideas and wonderful players your only snag seems to be making it merge into written word since pictures seem to be much more of your medium so please... if your intrested you can find me on the forums or e-mail me or just ask me to write to you at the next chapter or in the comments... but please... dont give up on this beautiful story
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, why does he not remember her from class?
I'm glad to see you've continued the story. I just found the last two chapters and can't wait for more.
I'm glad to see you've continued the story. I just found the last two chapters and can't wait for more.
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Superb!
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. I never read the one shot. This I really like, keep going please.... LOL! :D
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is beyond magnificent. i can't wait for an update!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting good! Hope you update soon, I really want to see how the training between Cynthia and Jason goes!
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good please post more soon!!!!!!!!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pleeease don't abandon this story! it's so perfect, just the kind of daydream I could have on days when I feel lonely and bored. and to find it here written dorn is a dream come true, so please finish it!