rate_review Reviews

I like it, I want to see how the dynamics of their relationship evolve. Please continue.

hi, you should definitey continue this; its a great fic with a lot of potential. You've written it greatly - it seems realistic enough. you've also got the plus on your side that you took the time to develop the plot without diving head first into smut like other writers and lastly it flows w/o seeming like a rendition of a play by play. Please update soon on this fic and wannabe sub! thanks....

nice. I love the long chapter and yor writing style was great.

Hmmmmm I wouldn't mind you continuing this xD Nope, not at all.

I'll keep an eye open for it. ^^

This is wonderful. Yes D/s is whatever you need it to be. Can't wait to read more.