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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really really love your writing style and the fact that the Dom isn't abusive (there are just too many of those stories floating around). Can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, you made me cry. 8 you, lots. Write more. Okay?
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sldfjsdlkfj
I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THIS STORY LIKE YESTERDAY
When I was checking to see who updated
I was like
"I wonder what happened to that D/S story with the molested kid and the hot sexy manbeast.."
LO AND BEHOLD.
=D
..
frankly
I love you
♥
I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THIS STORY LIKE YESTERDAY
When I was checking to see who updated
I was like
"I wonder what happened to that D/S story with the molested kid and the hot sexy manbeast.."
LO AND BEHOLD.
=D
..
frankly
I love you
♥
schedule
October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude, woah! I'm steadily falling in love with this story ;D I think that it's a great idea to leave in the sexual abuse element. Because it is, as you say it, drama-tastic ^o^ And it means that I can keep expecting more than just sex, haha. Thanks for writing~
schedule
October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
the 1st chapter i was wowed i loved the characrters the dynamic the angst everything
and then i was further amazed in the second chapter u r truly talennted and i hope to read more of this story very soon
the 1st chapter i was wowed i loved the characrters the dynamic the angst everything
and then i was further amazed in the second chapter u r truly talennted and i hope to read more of this story very soon
schedule
October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well even though i'm not one for d/s releationships, i really like this story, ur characters are awesome and it's one hot read...so i say keep on it ^-^
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!
Please continue this! It seems pretty accurate from what I know about D/s relationships and I'm already mad about it on only the first chapter!!!! Please, please continue it and update!!!!!! *prays you will*
Please continue this! It seems pretty accurate from what I know about D/s relationships and I'm already mad about it on only the first chapter!!!! Please, please continue it and update!!!!!! *prays you will*
schedule
August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The few D/s relationships that I've encountered are mostly like this. However there are the ones that are like "RAWR YOU DID BAD I KEEL YOU EMOTIONALLY" when the sub being like "OHGOD IM SO SORRY *emoemoemo*" x] You did a good job depicting this, though.
A 23 year old man so naive about sex and D/s... yet he fits the role perfectly. Mmm. Me likes. ;D
If you have more ideas for this, then please, continue. I liked that the first part was long, a good read, and well-written. :] Though uh. Do a good description of Hayden, hmm? We don't know if he's attractive for a fat balding man. XD;; Which I hope he's a stud. o_o; Cha.
♥
A 23 year old man so naive about sex and D/s... yet he fits the role perfectly. Mmm. Me likes. ;D
If you have more ideas for this, then please, continue. I liked that the first part was long, a good read, and well-written. :] Though uh. Do a good description of Hayden, hmm? We don't know if he's attractive for a fat balding man. XD;; Which I hope he's a stud. o_o; Cha.
♥
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Oh. Oh my.
Oh, Lord, that was a nice and refreshing drink of ice water after a desert of "BDSM" that's really just an abusive relationship with whips and cool toys. If you want to write an abusive relationship, just do so, but don't perpetuate the stereotypes about members of "The Scene."
Your story contains a LOT of things that so many other writers forget about, like aftercare, LIMITS (I LOVE YOU FOR THE LIMITS), and just... Unf. I need more. So continue this or I'll hunt you down, mmkay?
Oh, Lord, that was a nice and refreshing drink of ice water after a desert of "BDSM" that's really just an abusive relationship with whips and cool toys. If you want to write an abusive relationship, just do so, but don't perpetuate the stereotypes about members of "The Scene."
Your story contains a LOT of things that so many other writers forget about, like aftercare, LIMITS (I LOVE YOU FOR THE LIMITS), and just... Unf. I need more. So continue this or I'll hunt you down, mmkay?
schedule
August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far. I absolutely want you to continue!