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for New Life

by heroineM

person Shaznay
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Daniel is a very deep character and in two chapters, you've managed to make me fall for him. Even though English isn't your first language, you seem to be doing fine by me. A few slips here and there but nothing to make me want to stop reading this. You're off to a wonderful start. Eager for more.

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