rate_review Reviews

I am enjoying your thought process here. I like the way Alex is going about his business (and despite age, also makes me realize, what a little innocent I actually am). I do wonder though on his reference to 'love' and his attitude towards it. So what gives. . . is this going to be one of your throw away lines, or does it have something to do with whatever his name is who was mentioned in an earlier chapter?

Also beginning to wonder how much of this is biographical . . . Hmmm?
bahen

All right, so me being the vain bastard I am I started reading the story because he has my name
and then I fell in love ;D
Update soon, Ill definitely be back for more.

wow, this is good, i can't wait to read more!

Hey, I love Alex and his thought process. Hope the redhead cheerleader type doens't drive him too crazy. . .Would like a bit more background knowledge though, as he and the family seem to move around alot. Also sounds as if he is going to a rich bitch school, but he and his family are not. . . And are we going to find out more about 'Jonas' or was that just a throw away line to make us wonder?
bahen

As I promised. . .and me like, Sal. I can see great possibilities here. Just why did he live in an African Hut for 3 years straight (I do find the most obscure points, don't I?) So I'll try to remember to check back here to see how you go on this one.
bahen