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for Rocking Toby

by Jetfire

person lividifre
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
UGH! that's gross. I hope he clears up the junk before he 'rocks' Toby:/
person Castris
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I like the characters, can't wait to see how they react to each other.
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story!

I love Ethan's Cockney accent. It is Cockney, right? lol

I can imagine how he's gonna clash with Toby's band.

Looking forward to reading more.

Oh, and the days of the week (Friday, Saturday), should be capitalized. As should J.C. ;)
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is cool. It had a really fun feel to it and their experiences before they met each other made for a perfect contradiction. I have a feeling that Ethan going to have a hard time of courting Daisuke, especially with all the rumors of his sexual prowess. Do you plan on continuing this?
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story so far and it would be great to see some more updates for it even though its been a couple of years and there probably won't be.
Daisuke is so cute! And man I hate man whores like Ethan, glad he's found someone to catch his interest <3 I hope you do eventually update =D
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like, lol. This is the first story I've read with this kind of dialect.
person Anjanette
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon

I love the story, I want to know what happen next

I love daisuke's personality
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Ethan he's awsome!! Well for a manwhore lol. Keep writing pleeeeze!! :D
person Shinzo
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How do I keep randomly landing on your stories? I swear! I'm just going down the list and picking out ones that look interesting, not even looking at who writes them, and the last three have been yours! I guess this makes you my new favorite, huh? ^_^ Love! PLease write more soon! I enjoy this soooo much! Yeppers!
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope it gets better cause i reely like this story an hope it continues.