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for Rocking Toby

by Jetfire

schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this story is fun. I want more. xoxo Robin
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what a cute chapter! Poor Toby, all flustered with Ethan's arm around him. lol Too cute.

I absolutely LOVE Ethan's accent. It's so cool how you write the accent and I read it in my head with the accent. :)

As for the two friends who are fighting - they better watch it, otherwise Ethan may kick their asses off the tour! He'll keep blondie though. lol
person Giraffe
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww yeah, get him Ethan! :D
person Miyabi
schedule March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is cute, not overly dramatic with a flair of humour I so enjoy.
Can't wait to read more. =)
-Jane (Miyabi is a joint writing team, so I always sign to let you know which one you're talking to. =3 )
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
"...You have the attention span of a baked bean." "Ethan's La La Sex Land" Omg, those two lines had me cracking up!!!

You do the Cockney accent so well, Aduial! :)

Can't wait till they meet face-to-face again! lol
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg! I adore this story!! Can't wait for more~~~
person sevans
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story got me hooked already. I keep checking on the website hoping to see a new chapter every time. You have a knack for putting a character together and also a good sense of humor which everybody appreciates, I'm sure. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks.
schedule March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! Now Tobes is going to think that ETHAN was the guy in leather! But no, he would have known if Ethan was the leather guy last night. lol

I can't wait to hear THIS conversation! lol
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Very entertaining characters and looking forward to reading more of this.
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Toby! Shit, I hope Ethan gets to him before Leather Rapist Guy has his way with him.

I loved the part where Mark just wanted to get the hell out of there and go home to his wife! lol

Great chapter, Aduial! :)