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*Damon. Oops! My auto spell checker got turned on and automatically changed it. I'm dying to know what's up with Angel. Please update so we can all find out. ><

I think it was just right and rather cute^_^ I’m glad he gets to see Angel so soon, but I’m wondering what happened to make Edward bring him over so soon. This seems like it is usually private bonding time for the new pairs. But anyway, I have to say, I love your story!! It is very well written, which makes me want to squeal because sometimes it’s hard to find those:) I really like Lex. He’s intelligent, independent, and aggressive, but at the same time he likes being cuddled and loved on by Lucien, even if he doesn’t really want to admit it. I think it’s a good combination of characteristics. He’s not a doormat, but he’s not an overly aggressive jerkwad either. I think you are also doing great pace wise. The story doesn’t seem to be moving to slow or too fast and I’ve been interested in everything that has happened so far, though the interlude was my least favorite. I’m excited to see what happens next. He seems to already be warming up to Lucien which I’m glad of. Lucien seems like a really good guy. Things I can’t wait to see: Lex turning into his animal form. I think he’s a wolf? I’m curious. Also, I want to see how/when he decides to talk. I hope it’s soon. Lucien would like it even more and then they would be able to communicate a lot better. I know I’m kind of rambling, but this is a very good story and I haven’t ever reviewed for it. So overall, good dialogue, good description, and good job at keeping our interest! Can you send me an e-mail the next time you update? My e-mail is kissedbymidnight@gmail.com. If it’s not to much trouble.

This story is quite interesting and I like how it is progressing so far. I'm excited to see what will happen next!

Loved the nice long update--eagerly awaiting the next one.
Might sound kind of weird but I love the way you do spacing in your stories.
Hope I can read on soon
Xoxox

Awww! Angel! ;n;
I just want to hug him, the poor thing must have gone through such a culture shock! I kind of need to know what happens next!

chp 13. Okay, now Lex, you've got Angel in your arms. If anyone touches you or him: BITE them! If they try to take Angel out of the room and out of your line of site: screech, throw things, set Lucien on fire. I think you should be trying to set Edward on fire just on principle at this point.

Excited about Lex and Angel being reunited. Can't wait for more. Just checking in and encouraging you to keep writing. If possible, maybe you could give an estimate of when the next update will be posted. Thanks! *lotsofencouragement*

Angel! How I love the reunion scene! So sweet!
I'm eagerly awaiting when and how he'll find out about his ri's intelligence.

It would make my year if you continued this story. :)
Its... entrancing.

Nice and please update asap!