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for Independence

by arimi

person luc
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
when u going to updated ? isalready so long ...updated please i want to knoe what happened with they reunion.....
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another weekly post to say please keep writing this story, no matter how long it takes. I'll be keeping my fingers crossed and knocking on wood that you get some time to write and are able to update soon. Kudos to you imagination and creativity for being able to come up with this amazing, unique story/world.
person clovermax
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
White roses. so why was Angel crying and when does Lex break down his silence and surprise Lucian. Looking forward to more
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's been a week already. Hope you're doing well and life's not too busy/stressful. I can't wait wait to find out why Angel is so upset (since there seems to be some sort of rather psychic link between the twins, did Angel 'sense' that Lex was hurt?). My curiosity is seriously peaked. As previously mentioned hope life is going well and that you're able to find a bit of time to write here and there. *lotsofsupportandencouragement* I truly love this story. You've done a great job fleshing out the characters as well. The audience can really get a sense of their personalities (even the side ones: aka Reeve Blackforest, Damon Winter, and Lucien's friend, the Ri doctor). I'll be keeping my fingers crossed that you'll get some time to update soon.
person Manda
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just starting reading your story today, and have totally been absorbed into the world you've created. Feeling a bit at a loss without any more chapters to read, so I'm hoping that you'll please please please update soon, cos I cant wait to see how the relationship between Lex and Lucien developes, and what will happen when its revealed who Lex really is!!!

So keep it up chica, cos this story is amazing!!!!
person kame
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! Poor guys can't get a minute alone!
I'm eagerhappyfaced thinking about how and when his old, and newly adopted life will collide.
Great way to build up you characters!
Xoxo
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just doing a weekly check-in to encourage you to keep writing whenever you can update as soon as you get the chance. On the edge of my seat waiting to find out why Angel is so upset and what Lex is going to do about it. Also, I can't wait to see Lex's animal form (does he really turn into a panther?) Can't wait/exicted to see that as well as Lucien's reaction to Lex's animal form.
person maloanne
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your latest chapter and I enjoyed it!
I wonder how things will progress. I mean is there a problem with Angel, or was he somehow able to communicate with his mate?
And I wonder what will become of the ri: I am guessing that in the end they are able to speak and to interact with people....
Gha!!! I am so eager for the next chapter!!! :-)

Bye!
M

person sm
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update. Every day I check to see if you've posted a new chapter. Sounds pathethic I know, but your story is just that good. Pretty please?
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've just re-read the first 10 chapters of this story and I love it even more that the first time. Please please try to update soon? Oh, just a thought, but are Reeve Blackforest and Damien Winter going to appear againt at all in the future? I think Reeve and Lex could become friends; it would be an interesting relationship. Then there's the affect it would have on Lex's relationship with Lucien. What do you think? Well, I was just wondering as I re-read those chapters, especialy since there's a scene between Damien and Reeve, over the aftermath of Reeve's fight with Lucien. Btw, I noticed a typo in Ch. 4 as I was re-reading. 10th paragraph (2nd one after the first break), which was left to flow freely down his back (instead of which was let to flow freely down his back). Just a heads up; not sure if you already knew about it or not. Your writing has been relatively typo-free though. Kudos. Oh, and again please try to update soon. Thanks!