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by arimi

person Jetfire
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah another wonderful chapter....BUT please please pleas update sooner next time, that wait is killing me....especially since well since they need to have sex...soon...very soon.

Hugs
Aduial
person Zykaite
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, sorry for the lateness. I already sent the chapter back to you. There was almost nothing to change, anyway.

Anyway, it's nice to see Lucien and Lex getting along fabulously as usual :P I WANT HIM TO FIND OUT THAT LEX CAN TALK ALREADY. *hint hint hint* Argh, I'd expected it to happen at around chapters 7 or 8, and now it's 14 and he STILL hasn't found out that Lex can talk. I don't really know what the mass hysteria has to do with anything atm, but I suppose that'll be answered in the later chapters. When you write them, that is... :P For now I'll just treat it as a bonding event or something. But zomg is it forecasting, like, war??? Or a huge natural disaster or something...

Btw, Edward is hot. Very hot. You should make sequel/side-story with him as main character. Ilike. :)
person Zykaite
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oops, forgot the obligatory 'update soon'! :) So... yeah. UPDATE SOON!!!
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you have started updating this! yay!
person Samirnie
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Never mind about the grammar the main point is the update! Thank you so much for it. I really love this fic of yours. The hole concept of dom/sub Dragons is brilliant! And then there's Lex who is totally something else. I'm so looking forward to read about when Lucien is going to find out that his sweet, innocent, grown-in-gottonball Ri is not quite what he expected. ;)
Lucien is one hot piece of lizard. He really knocks my socks of. And it's utterly adorable that Lex makes him all mushy and lovey-dovey. It's so much fun. =D
I also would like to read a spin-off with Edward and Angel. I'm sure it would be so sweet that I'd have a diabetes. So worth it. <3
Your update really made my day. Thank you so much again. I hope you will find time to update more frequently. I know it's quite a demand with the real life and all, but...I just love so much this fic. I have never asked before this from the author. So I must be desperate. Sorry, never mind. Just take your time and do the amazing work as so far.
I will love you forever. And so going to read the hole thing again when it's complete...
person Melsa
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want to see Lex mess up and talk in front of them, that would be a real shocker for everyone.
person clovermax
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay - just yay
person Somnium
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I loves this story. No matter how long it takes you to write it. But I need some speed and some more chappies! And, as always, I greatly anticipate the moment when Lucien's Ri can no longer hold his oh-so intelligent - and belligerent - tongue. Honestly I'm surprised he's lasted this long. hope to hear from you soon! Toodles <3
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the status update on your profile! It's really appreciated. I can't wait for Ch. 14. I'm so excited! Hope you're doing great and life isn't too busy.
person betrayed
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy Memorial Day! Haha a bit of an oxymoron huh? Anyways I'm back! Our vacation had some complications so we ended up staying longer than planned. Then, when we got back, make up work swamped me, so sorry! But I guess it's not much of an excuse :) but just know i'm still loyally addicted to your story! On another subject, is it just me or does it seem like when I do actually loyally review once a week you update so much faster? Of course, as usual this review is merely a plea asking you to update Independence as soon as possible or just to give a shout out on your author page to let us know you are still alive and also when the next chapter will be out. :) I'm sure every one of your fans and dedicated readers like me are dying to know what happens next! :) I'll be waiting and if you give a shout out on your page by June 3, I promise to review every week for the duration of the summer! :)
From your most dedicated reader,
Betrayed