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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! i wonder who will get angel and lexis...
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this!!! I simply can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what an update!!! :D I love it! and i am actually a fan of the information..haha so you'll never hear me complain ^^; can't wait to read more!
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
got a headache form your hints but hey you're forgiven if you update soon.
i love th estoy,don't mind the detailed info and i want to know what will happen to lex's brother(which dom,which,which?)
m'so anxious.
i love th estoy,don't mind the detailed info and i want to know what will happen to lex's brother(which dom,which,which?)
m'so anxious.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.upload some more.yay!!:)))
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ri's sucks to be in a position with no choice . I like Lex and even though I doubt he will escape its going to be interesting. Ihope that he and his brother Angel at least will not be cut off from each other that their dominants will let them still talk and see each other.I look forward to the day the dominant flies over Lex's shoulder grin.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey, don't worry about revealing too much in the beginning. You said you're new at this and you will learn with each review from seasoned writers how much to reveal of the history of a race or species or whatever. As far as I'm concerned, you're doing just fine.
Can't wait to see how Lex is going to get himself and his brother out of their current situation. What I'm trying to say is hurry with the next chapter.
Can't wait to see how Lex is going to get himself and his brother out of their current situation. What I'm trying to say is hurry with the next chapter.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far ! Your writing is pretty good !
Wait for the next chapter...
Wait for the next chapter...
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The info's useful, but I can't wait to see the dominants and submissives interact; update soon please!
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've updated! This is coming along nicely. The Dragons seem very interesting. And I'm really rooting for a Lex-Lucien alliance now. ;-)