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for Independence

by arimi

person szaugg
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this sounds like it's gonna be a lot of fun. I like the idea very much - so interesting. I look forward to seeing more!
person Madhater
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful start i love this story i hope to see what happens next.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww..the ending sort of siappointed me..not in a bad way... It was just I was hoping to read more, I know..I'm greedy. I can't help it, your story is so interesting. I've never read anything like this one, I don't think the idea has been used often or at all. Thanks so much for the update, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work, you're doing an amazing job so far. Take care. 8D
person wynja
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the second chapter too! can't wait for the thisrd... sorry, short rev but I'm on the run... I'll do better next time...
person fmadiva
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, I just wish he'd meet one of the dominants already. Sorry I'm impatient. Please update!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this story! Would acting like a proper submissive really do the trick though? Because it seems the dragon's like those submissives - wonder if they'd be so attracted to a glaring, dominant submissive? :P Please continue
person kulash
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter looking forward to more
person 90McPhee
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Chapter 2! Love your story so far, thanks for sharing!
person spex
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is information overload, but I kind of like it :P I like the way you're writing this. I can't wait for the next chapter :D !
person Laie
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can tell Lex is going to be a bit of a badass, but I like his brother better anyway XP

Look foward to meeting their doms!