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ahhhh!
so, lex and angel are twins. identical?
and... some inner soul mate thing happened at the end, im digging it!
im so into this story, im already imagining whats going to happen in the future and stuff.
so far i see it going 2 ways: lex managing to play his part, getting a mate, and waiting for the right moment to escape and theres like this huge LotRs journey to break his bro out of where ever... or one of those doms go too far and piss him off and he blows his little facade in the glass box, and everyones all like stunned that the little cave man is smart and hes all like, 'i want my lawyer'. lol. and he breaks the glass with one of his gnarly kung fu moves...
but, im probably way off. lol. need nother update.
and oh, lexs animal is totally a big cat or something... not some rodent like the other subs, right?
and, reeves and damon are too cool... hoping they come like friends with lex.
and, its so obvious who lex has just been paired up with... but, what is he? a king? did i miss his little info background somewhere. me go back and check.
and, im wondering who angel is going to be paired with.
i liked this chapter too, keep it going.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ahhh I'm obsessed!!! ahaha I'm at a loss for words- I can't wait for pt2!! :)

Well lex is doing what he can but i'm pretty sure the two walking up, are going to be very interested.

Oh how fun. i'm really enjoying how this is shaping up. Really liked how the history, especially the submissive's, is being revealed as he's watching teh dominants around him. Jsut thought that was smoothly done and really enjoying getting to know more about the world.

And glad is poor little brother is so cute and flirty - that was just an adorable image.

Great story! But this cliffhanger drives me crazy (not that I don't like cliffhangers but) please update (soon)!!

ohoh. this was good. i had some questions about the first chapter. but the second one answered alot.
so, is angle dumb as a caveman then? did lexis name him? and wont the doms know lexis is different than the others, cuz hes bigger and all?
where ever your taking the story, its starting out really good... so dont blow it.lol

More please. Pretty please. This is the type of story I love and can never get enough of. Your characters are well defined and act consistently. Thank you for sharing this.

I'm loving this! Keep it coming, please...

gya I love this story please keep updating. I can't wait to see what Lex does! Ahaha, I can see it all going to heck and instead he attracts the attention of Lucien. squee