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for Independence

by arimi

person Madhater
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read more i'm so excited to see what happens next, please update soon. ^_^
person mcdgoddess
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter better too! I can't yet to read about the interaction between Lex and Lucien. These two are definitely each others match.
person wynja
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm proud to be one of the cheer-leaders... hell, I'll even wave those stupid pon-pons around... I soooooo love this story and I think it's coming along just great! Well, go back to writing now, while I work on the cheer... ;o)
person cece
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please.love this.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Give me a J! Give me a U! Give me a S! Give me a T! Give me a dreaming! What's that spell?

... I'll stop. Loved the chapter, although I think your description of the two dominants watching Lex went on a little too long - I'm guessing they're going to become important characters? Hope you update soon!
person kalush
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like the chapter but not the ending
person RJaneyP
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, please write faster! I most impatient.

Just recently read another story with a Dragon theme, it upset me terribly, because the nasty Author Killed off the loveable main character and it made me truly angry.

I glad to hear you like happy endings... for they make me happy too! G

Ps Can't wait for the next chapter... so LOL... hurry up!
person miles
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh ! What's happened next ?
Great chapter...
person tf
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still definitely in suspense of seeing which dominants end up wanting Lex and his brother and how far his plan can go; update soon please!
person heroineM
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just got to read this and must say it's really great, the way you portrayed Lex and this whole different world. so, will i be right to assume that lex will end up with Lucien? Eager for update.