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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THe fight is on, then? Exciting! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter as the greedy reader I am...
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! I love this story! Heart Heart for pissy subs! I really want Lex to talk though! I would be just shouting and screaming for all I was worth! Oh, This is so exciting! I can't wait till Lucien finds out what he got himself into! Please update quickly!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like yout plot so far and I love the characters already.I hope you'll update soon because this contest will be something that's for sure ! Aida
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I like this one!
Lots of info in the first 2 chapters, but that doesn't matter. I actually like all that info as it makes the fic seem more 'real', if you know what I mean. It shows that you have thought about the world this fic takes place in and have spend time to give it a decent backstory and in turn give the characters a motivation for their actions.
Little to no grammar/spelling mistakes that I could find, good chapter length (though I just love looooong chapters ;) ), summary fits the story and a pleasent writing style....just keep on writing!!!
ps: three of your recommended stories I am reading as well (The Last Pure Human, Tentacles for the Brides Bouquet, Bacca di Sangue), so if this goes something like those stories then I am your number one fan XD
Lots of info in the first 2 chapters, but that doesn't matter. I actually like all that info as it makes the fic seem more 'real', if you know what I mean. It shows that you have thought about the world this fic takes place in and have spend time to give it a decent backstory and in turn give the characters a motivation for their actions.
Little to no grammar/spelling mistakes that I could find, good chapter length (though I just love looooong chapters ;) ), summary fits the story and a pleasent writing style....just keep on writing!!!
ps: three of your recommended stories I am reading as well (The Last Pure Human, Tentacles for the Brides Bouquet, Bacca di Sangue), so if this goes something like those stories then I am your number one fan XD
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like like like like
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes ! You're thinking too much ! Because that was great !
And really thank you for your quick update !
And really thank you for your quick update !
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you're thinking too much or not, but PLEASE keep doing whatever it is you're doing. I love the story!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i very much enjoyed it. the pace continues to improve from my perspective. Course now that we're getting to the more exciting parts, i really can't wait to see what happens, especially the period where lucien doesn't quite get what's going on with Lex since lex is more then meets the eyes ;D
I really really hope the muses stay with you on this one :)
I really really hope the muses stay with you on this one :)
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The flow was fine. It was a very exciting ch and the way you broke it up in parts kept the excitement high. Can't wait to see how the challenge works out.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I am so happy you updated, I was beginning to be afraid (read patick) that youhad given up the story like so much others new aothors...
For this chapter, I liked it very much. I loved the passage where Lex wondered about mother nature ressentment against him. His guess was as good as another; LOL. But I'am sure he is wrond and that he is in fact mother nature,s favorite...
I can't wait for the first meeting, and interaction between our two heroes...So here come the begging : Pleaaaase, Update soon!!! (even if I'am aware the waiting is the price to pay for a good chapter, LOL or SOB?)
Bye
M
I am so happy you updated, I was beginning to be afraid (read patick) that youhad given up the story like so much others new aothors...
For this chapter, I liked it very much. I loved the passage where Lex wondered about mother nature ressentment against him. His guess was as good as another; LOL. But I'am sure he is wrond and that he is in fact mother nature,s favorite...
I can't wait for the first meeting, and interaction between our two heroes...So here come the begging : Pleaaaase, Update soon!!! (even if I'am aware the waiting is the price to pay for a good chapter, LOL or SOB?)
Bye
M