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This is an interesting fic, though I think maybe it needs to be tightened up a little bit? It's a bit rambling. So, humans know there are dragons? That's a little unclear. It also seems a little weird that the dominants have dragon forms and the subs don't. The dominants are badass and powerful...so what are the subs bringing to the table? It might be cool if the subs had some ability that made them more equal in the partnership. Don't get me wrong, a top/bottom dynamic is totally hot. But it would be good if the subs were useful as well as ornamental. Also, I hope Lex hits a dominant with a stick. Just once.

Why are the other subs so dumb? Or is it because Lex left the island and actually learned language?

Anyway, can't wait for more.

So the confrontation finally comes to a head, I wonder if and how lucien is going to carry off lex because I know he's not going without a fight.

the flow was good, i really enjoyed this chapter cause of the thick tension in the air mwahahahah!

Damn, I haven't been this interested in a story in ages. I really love how this is going. Please don't tell me its on hiatus or abandoned. I really want to see how the fight scene and the following chapters will play out. Keep up the good work.

i liked it...poor lex...

I really like this story, keep going.

So sorry for not reviewing in a while, I'm a bit of a slow reviewer xD

I love this story! Keep up the good work!
And...O___O I really cant wait to find out what happens when Lucien takes Lex home...ha..wow...

Yeah! New chapter! I find it excellent^^
PS: how old is Lex??

I really like this story. It's original. I like how you have created a whole new world and you have all of that info about the dragons and everything. going back to chapter one (since i just "discovered" this story), I don't actually mind the info dump. true, it could have been done a little more artfully done, but it didn't take away from the story enough for me to complain. Not to mention I'm the type of person to like that kind of information. All in all, I hope you see this story through to the end, because I would hate to see it unfinished. Thank you for posting it! I'm looking forward to the next installment!

I find that your story is really interesting and different from many of the typical storylines, which is really thought out. Please continue!!!