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by arimi

schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm absolutely fall in love with this story!

I like the world you've created for the story... Can't wait to read more!
person Aki Arau
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAH!!! cliffie!!!! AAAARRGGGGGH!!! I need more! MORE! I'm loving this story... A LOT! UPDATE!!!
person tf
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and always check for updates... I hope we get a flashback of the dominants' fight, but it's nice to see Lucien won-hope Angel doesn't get separated from his brother or that they can visit; thanks for the update!
person L.S.
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh crap is right!!! haha omg.... I think I yelped outside when you wrote about the eyes haha can't wait to read more!! :)
person Natalie Logue
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm so happy you updated! I really can't wait until Lucien finds out his little sub is oh so very smart and not at all typical! YAY! update soon!
person Aida
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I take it Lucien won...oh joy !!! great chapter.Aida
person romanticfae
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it
please upate soon
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story.. You defiently have me hooked.. I want to know what happens next!!
person mcdgoddess
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! So, am I correct to assume that Lucien won the fight. I can't wait to read about that beat down. I wonder if Angel saw and felt his potential mate as well? I'll be waiting for the next update!
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PRETTY GOOD!!!!!