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for Independence

by arimi

person getting bored of waiting
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you need to update soon. it's been ages.
person moimoi-chan
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading this fic (again), and dream about an update soon. Love it!
person lil devil
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is lex ever going to talk? i keep waiting for the moment where he reveals how smart and different he really is
person Monica
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I truly love ur story due to it's orginality & I can't wait for the next chapter.
person miles
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's been some time since the last update... I hope you're ok...
Give us some news and a new chapter soon... :))
person Tan
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story) Kept me amused all the time)
‘How to potty train your Ri?’ almost killed me with laughter =)
Absolutely hilarious and adorable story)
I wish a lot of free time and inspiration to the author to update it as soon as possible.

Thank you very much!)
person freakjoyspastic
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! I need another chapter soon. I'd really like to see where this story is going. The ending just leaves me hanging. Please update so I can see more of little Ri together.
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first, sorry I didn't review sooner. I just realized that I never did after the last update, which is mostly due to being out of the country when the update was posted and not having computer access. So, while I managed to read the update, I wasn't really able to review, and once I was back home I completely forgot.
That said, OMG, AN UPDATE!!!! YAAYYYY!!!!!!!! I'm [was] so excited! I love this story! Mass hysteria, hmmm? That's interesting. And the plot thickens. It seems all is not right in their world/universe. I wonder what it was about. And why did it only affect Lex after he tried to reach into Angel's mind to try to calm him down? Why didn't it affect him sooner, like all the other Ri's? Does it have to do with him being special? Or is it because of his human side, or just that he's not connected enough with the others Ri's and only has a close enough connection with Angel? But then, what about that doctor's Ri and the way he reacted to Lex (when Lucien takes him to the Ri doctor after he hurts his ankle)? Please hurry and update again soon. I can't wait to find out more. And as you so meanly put it, we have to wait to read to find out. But that's hard to do when there's no updates. So, please, pretty please, with cookies on top, try to update soon?
And THANK YOU SO MUCH for posting a status update on your author profile about when ch. 14 was gonna be posted. It was really appreciated. Would be really grateful if you could maybe start doing that for future chapters (hinthint).
So, please keep up the great work writing and updating. [Lots of love and a big hug of encouragement to keep you writing.]
person madqueend
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story and cannot wait until you update again. hopefully soon?
person BittyTatFattyCat
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating, I've been in love with this story for over a year now, and I'm just super happy there's another chapter. Thanks again so much and have a happy Independence (haha) Day.