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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my God! Had Lucien been spying on him? Then he must have found out that Lex is not a regular Ri! Man can;t wait to see what happens... thanks for the update... hope i can read the next one soon~~~
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, as I've loved all the others. Really can't wait for the next one.
A small criticism - around the middle of the chapter Lex was thinking about escaping, and I can understand that, of course, but I think you repeated his thoughts far too much. You kept mentioning that it would have been harder to escape if they'd been confined to just one room, and kept mentioning how it was easier as they were in the forest. It was rather unecessary :P
A small criticism - around the middle of the chapter Lex was thinking about escaping, and I can understand that, of course, but I think you repeated his thoughts far too much. You kept mentioning that it would have been harder to escape if they'd been confined to just one room, and kept mentioning how it was easier as they were in the forest. It was rather unecessary :P
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What's gonna happen now!???!
Poor little guys... I can't wait to see what will happen to them!
Angel is sooooooooo cute! I love them both! *huggles* :)
Thanks alot for the awesome story! I loooooooooove it! It's great! *hugs*
Now I can't wait to read more! XD
Poor little guys... I can't wait to see what will happen to them!
Angel is sooooooooo cute! I love them both! *huggles* :)
Thanks alot for the awesome story! I loooooooooove it! It's great! *hugs*
Now I can't wait to read more! XD
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! a new chapter. i am so happy. seriously this made my day. I'm kinda interested to Lucien's POV for the fight. would you be doing that in the next chapter? And I completely understand being busy. i am too. I'm just so happy that you don't plan on abandoning the story anytime soon. Thank you!
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh crap! lucien won! i hope that collar comes off... and i hope that angel gets to stay nearby. i don't want them separated... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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ASOTA
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! It's almost painful to have to wait for updates - but I'll be strong, I promise. ;P I hope we get to read some more from Angel's POV as well. He's too adorable.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grin- yay!! I liked Lex's trying to keep from being human handled- hmmm being kept in a large forest until claiming- probably would make the Ri's calmer- cept for Lex and I think what Lucien likes is that Lex isnt typical. but I do hope the two dragons dont keep Lex and Angel apart. Is Lex a cat? how about Angel? How do the dominants "claim"/tame the Ri- do they make it so the Ri bond to them? Oh Crap- what a good ending...
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're evil !! ^^
To stop the story like that !! *sigh*
Until next.........
To stop the story like that !! *sigh*
Until next.........
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for this update! I thought this chapter might contain a battle scene - but I love how you launched into Lex's scheming little adventurous mind - and am looking forward to things heating up between Lucien and him! Hope you'll be inspired to write again soon!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only to say I was so happy to see another chapter up. I loved it even if the end is frustrating as hell... Lol; And I like your idea to update once a week, I do think it will allow me not to gnaw my nails completely out (if that mean anything in english?)
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