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hey this is good, i wasn't too sure by reading the summary, but its cool. Something different at last can't wait to see what happens next.

so cute! so so cute Lol... Love the ending. I can just imagine the look on Lex's face when his blur case of a brother ignored him like that.

YIIIHOOO an update! And I enjoyed it so much too. Reeve made ma laught. And I love how Lucien thought of Lex. I appreciate how you show us what both of them think. It is not a one side point of view...I really hope you will be able to update soon. Even if my reason tells me you have others thing to do, that deos not stop me to want you to update twice a day..; LOL
So until next time
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M

Aww.hahaha, I love how Lucien describes the submissives. I can't believe you just ended it there, I was like, "No!!!!" Lol..I'm sorry,it was just getting so good, and suddenly there was nothing left to read. Now, I definitely can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work! 8D

Battle -ha that was an all out rout. grins but what is Angel doing - I hope he doesnt try to make Lex jealous.

Thanks for the update! As much as I wish that you could dedicate all of your time to just writing for us, we do realize that you have a life outside of AFF. Stuff happens and sometimes you can't update when you want. Just promise that you won't become one of those authors who doesn't update in 3 years or something. Then I would be sad.

Maybe I forgot something, but is there a reason why Angel can't speak? Now I wonder who Angel's mate will be.

Oh, I DO hope you find the time (somehow) to update next weekend as well! *puts some time in an envelope and mails it to you*. It's a story worth waiting for, though, andone is not likely to forget it... *hugs it hard*

As always, i absolutely loved this update! I am positively obsessed with this story and as always I am anxious to see what happens when Lucien finds his "cute little Ri" can speak and is at least as smart. Till Next Time!

great chapter

Loved the fight scene between Raven and Lucien. Especially when Raven realized once he was facing Lucien on the battlefield that he had made a BIG mistake in thinking he could whoopass.

I chuckled as I read Raven's best friend Damon scold the man for thinking he could take on an elder such as Lucien. And such a big baby! Boohooing as Damon is bandaging up his injuries. Then that hint of jealousy. Raven wanted the Ri because Lucien wanted the Ri. More will be revealed as the story progresses-I hope.

Lex and Lucien in another staredown. Its definately going to be fireworks between those two.

Angel's name certainly is not how I would describe him. He is truly a submissive. Sniffing Lucien and totally ignoring his brother's plea to "get away." Lex certainly has a full plate with a dominant after his butt and his brother's submissive behavoir. Whats a Ri to do?

Can't wait for the next chapter, however long it takes.