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for Independence

by arimi

person Liin
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I'm really curious about what'll happen next. :]
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_o' this is a first, as my first original on this site I must say I chose a darn good fic. For a first chapter you have me hooked :) WEll, off to read more, lol!
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, I just love this fic! It is kind of annoying how the dragons think the subs are 'weak' and 'cute' with the 'oh gosh they might fall and trip' sort of deal... don't they realise that the submissives lived out in the open and knew how to deal with predators? I figure the Dragons consider the subs weak because HELLO the subs are left on a bloody island! only to snatched and taken to parts unknown where of course they'll latch onto someone for 'protection' but i guarentee the subs can be just as vicious... rambled much I know, but it's interesting that a fic can have me act this way... *ponders*

Dahlias
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooo dont stop there! ^^ This is brilliant!
person viky
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! Angle! Don't do that >-<

But I am sure that the our handsome dominant will not do anything bad to him.

schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Understanding all the busy life problems, no worries :P Haha, that was priceless. Angel is a curious little fellow :P
person kiens
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure you got a couple of these comments...please please please keep angel and lex together (or close anyways), they are the cutest brothers! And an update is better than no updates, i mean i've waited for this one particular fiction for seven years and they still haven't updated, torture much?
person anon
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to say that I totally love your story (really!). Lex is like, the cutest non-submissive submissive I've ever seen (lol, that doesn't really make sense, does it?). I can't wait for him and Lucien to get together... *puppy eyes*

But yeah... you left us at a cliffhanger!!! They were staring at each other in chapter 5, and they're STILL staring at each other in chapter 6 (When is Lucien going to make a move??). You're EVIL. So please update soon!

p.s. I insist that Reeve and Damon get together.
person reid
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great i'm really enjoying it, the world you created is and is going to be mazing i can't wait for more
person miles
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! That was quick ! Thank you !
Perhaps the next time Lucien is going to speak to Lex... ^^