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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and as I am always willing to help...it was great !!!! I'm so happy Edward came for Angel.Of course He'll take good care of him.I can't wait for you next update.I wonder who will tame who...eh eh.Aida
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story!!! I love how you write, I like how slowly things are progressing even though the suspense is killing me! Thanks for the great read.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Angel!!!
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so sad, they got seperated. :( Still, I really liked they way Lucien acted with Angel it was too adorable for words, very fun to read. Thnaks for the update, i really enjoyed reading this chapter, keep up the great work! 8D
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. I'm enjoying. However, the characters feel too self-analytical. It's like they're analyzing their own behavior and explaining it to us, rather than us experiencing it with them.
Also, why did Lex just stand there for 20 minutes? Why didn't he grab Angel's arm and run? That actually could have been a very powerful and dramatic scene.
Also, why did Lex just stand there for 20 minutes? Why didn't he grab Angel's arm and run? That actually could have been a very powerful and dramatic scene.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first of all yayyyy! and aww, sad end for the chap but necessary nonetheless. definitely anticipating for the next scene.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How would the two Ro figure out that the Ri are brothers if it isnt common for there to be twin Ri? Can Lex or Angel talk once they are claimed? And I think that Angel is going to wrap Edward around his pinky with one more bat of his eyes. Why was Angel cuddling against Lucien? I think Lex is going to surprise Lucien and I think Lucien needs it so he can truly treasure Lex.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
squee! (sorry i suck at reviews, but i'm good at enthusiasm)
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I felt so sad for the brothers. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is amazing. And I do love dragons! I really like that Lex is so headstrong. Very nice =) I long for more =^.^=