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I think it's logical to separed the brothers !!
One mate for one submissive...
Can't wait for the next chapter !!

Hi,

I haven't done this in a while, reviewing so I might not be able to express myself clearly and I fear I'll just leave you confused as to what I really mean but oh, well, I'm going to try anyway.

First of all, my congratulations on a very good story you haqve there; it's engrossing, it makes a reader sit on the edge of their seat and it's definitely GOOD :) It saved me from an afternood of boredom once and since then I've been following it with piqued curiosity how you're going to keep up with it.

I also had a look at the reviews which you received, especially for the last chapter, and ... no one asked the obvious question :D

Alright, they asked a lot, and they were all important but still, something is missing there. No, not in your story, in those reviews. I mean, they worry about Angel and what is going to happen to brothers, if they're going to see each other and so on but still I'm tempted to ask - or rather try to guess - how Lex is going to keep up his image of a dumb submissive.

At the moment, he's still hiding it from Lucien but no intelligent creature can play dumb all the time; Lex is bound to have an unintentional slip-up, be it at some completely random moment or when Lucien is going to try to mate him. Oh, they're up to a lot of discoveries and realizations, those two *cackles*

And I realize it's going to be hard, to write it and to keep it up to the high standards you've set yourself. Good luck with that, I'm going to keep my fingers crossed for you and your story and I'm going to look forward to another chapter.

teeta

-.- it's been too long. I mean, technically, i've only been able to get an internet connection for a few weeks now, but eh?? eh eh??? I love this story by the way.

Oh i def like Lex, after all who wants someone who's pathetic. He's much more fun and I think it'll be most amusing if Lucien finds out that he can talk and understands every single word he's saying. That would probably be totally hilarious.

Hope the next chapter is a bit funnier though.

Hugs Aduial

YiiiHoooo!! You made my day. And that is actually something since I am suffering of the remnant of a big cold and have a tendencie to find everything boring. So thank you so much!
I liked how Angel was taken away, that was efficient. It seems to me that Lex doesnot understand Angel as well as Angel understand him. And that he is the only one feeling humilated by the whole mating process. Obviously Angel does not perceive the world the same way Lex Does. I would say he has been influenced by human culture...Lol.
I can't wait for the next chapter (as usual Lol)
Hugs
M

I really love this story and ache for every update but I am kinda glad you separated the brothers. Now maybe we can get some interesting interaction between our lovers!

Aww *huggles Lex*

Lex is so strong... I appreciate his despair over protecting his brother, and love his confidence to even try to stand as a buffer to the two dominants. Lex and Lucien are going to make a great couple.. I'm looking forward to Lucien's discovery that Lex is more than he'd ever hoped to find.

I'm sad too that it took you longer to update. But it was worth the wait. Can't wait for the next chapter. Just DYING to see the interaction between Lucien and Lex and maybe interaction between Edward and Angel. It will be interesting to see how the relationships between the two dominants and their submissives develope.

Please, please, don't take too long with the next chapter. I DO so enjoy reading this story. It is one of my top ten. They are:

Rift
August
Independence
Twilight of Ivory
A Bloody Kind of Kiss
Angelic Dreams
Can you say Woof?
Bite Me
Jaden
Vampire's Kiss

Just wish chapters of these stories came out every week. Ah well, what can you do?

An update, an update!! *jumps in her chair with joy*

Aaaw, those little darlings getting separated... I'm kinda curious how little adventurous Angel will deal with this development - and all Edward's jealous wannabe-lovers! ;)
But Angel will probably do much better than Lex, anyway... XD