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for Independence

by arimi

person Aki Arau
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic... though it is a tad slow, hence I'm often tortured with waiting. I'm hoping you update tomorrow since I've overtime work to do for the next 3 weeks - that means I can't read Independence for 3 weeks!!! But... such a quick update demand's all wishful thinking right? :P
person prettypinkpony(too lazy to log in)
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. I can't wait for the next update *hint,hint* that was absolutly adorable how Angel was getting um...oh man brain fart...forgot his name but you know who im talking about, to pet him. SCHWEET!! if you have an update list add me K?

noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I got a little annoyed with Angel in this chapter (Gah!Don'ttouchLucienhe'sLex'sdammit!) and then when he slinked off when Lex tried to protect him from the Ro's (oh,fortheloveofgodstaystillyoufool!). All in all, i really enjoyed it!
person loving
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Separated again, i'm pretty sure lex will see him and get him back soon enough.
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was so sad. i cried... please update soon! i want angel and lex to be reunited...
ASOTA
person womo
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm damn glad you separated them. it was sad, but necessary.

great chapter!!! the action part was well written.
person hyde
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave it there? I really love this story. It's fresh and new. New ideas, and good story telling. I really don't like having to wait. I mean i will... I just don't like to. I love how you have him know the language and how its set up. It's so interesting. I can't wait to read more!
person dut
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Lex... the boy us devastated... but glad that Edward was the one who got Angel, not some measly dragon... Can't wait to see the surprise on the dragons when they come to know Lex is just as intelligent as they are lol... thanks for the update... hope the next chapt wont take too long!
person wynja
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... so sad! But it had to happen... I do llllooooooove this story and it's so worth the wait (though waiting is cruel! Amnesty should be involved!);o) I kept holding my breath for Lex to give his intelligence away, but he seemed to manage... although playing dumb is not one of his stronger points... ;o) I feel a little scared about his brother, though... he seemed so scared of his dominant, poor thing... hopefully it was just shyness and it will go away soon... please try to find those pesky spare minutes to write!
All the best!
/Wynja
person viky
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! I am sorry for Lex to be separate from his little brother like that. But I am sure that the author would be an angle and bring them together again :)

I have some question. I know from your story that the submissive cant speak. Well if they can't, how can they communicate with the dominate then?