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for Independence

by arimi

person Anon
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just wanted to say that I have been following the story and I'm really enjoying it. I will be waiting for the next chapter!
person maloanne
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeheeeee, an update!
I honestly thought you had given up. I will know better now, and will wait faithfully.
As for my opinion, I didnot found this chapter boring. I liked how we could see how the bond was already forming. I also liked how he struggled against it.
And your ending is purely evil!!! I hope you update quicklier (? does this exist in english?)!!!
bye
M
person anon
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO glad you're back! it was a great and funny chapter, not boring at all. Please update soon! i so enjoy your story.
person miles
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it !! I'm SO happy !
Surprise, surprise in the next chapter ^^
person littlepuppy
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
such a great story, I discovered it today and it is breathtakingly awesome
person jazz
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I really want to read more :D
person J42
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated!! Thanks!! Love your characters and how the story is progressing. ;-)
person loving
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a mess he's gotten himself into, walking naked into a meeting room of 24 dominants. Lex had better run for his life and fast.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg! naked with an audience!
ASOTA
person kitty08
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story and I am really looking forward for more!! So please update soon!