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oh yeah, and I think that I will now officially join betrayed in the weekly-shameless-begging endeavor. Which leads me to something betrayed posted:

Betrayed: “I have officially decided that I think that lex is a jaguar
No actually leopard no maybe tiger
Ahhh I don't know
Just sumthing in the cat or feline family”

{cue sound of boxing match-start bell}

What?! No~s I disagree. A cat? Lex? No way. Wolf totally all the way. *nods nods* I mean, cats always have that “only look out for number one” or “you are of no importance to me” attitude. That’s totally not Lex at all. Wolfs are pack animals; they care about those close to them and are mistrusting of outsiders. Sound familiar? Over-protective brother-complex and hating the new Ros he’s meeting? Yup. Wolfish.

Besides he has blue eyes. Have you ever seen a jaguar/leopard/tiger with blue eyes? Only the white bangle tiger has blue eyes. But wolves? Think arctic now: the kind with white and grey fur. Blue eyes a~ll the time.

At least I hope he’s an arctic wolf and not a brown one….arctic’s so much more badass *coughs*

Oh yeah! And (like a true nerd) I quote: “Lex growled at them in response and even though his current form dampened the effects of the growl”. Since when do cats growl? Scratch? Oh yeah. Growl? Huh? No.

Besides, I definitely remember him saying that he used to like dogs before they were used to hunt them. What kind of cat likes dogs? Ok, rhetorical question there. I know there are exceptions, but….I mean….wolfwolfwolfwolfwolf….


I agree with you in that if he’s not in the canine family then he’s definitely in the feline one. I mean it would be totally random if all the sudden it was like “btw, Lex’s a grizzly bear” WTF?! That would be horrible!!



But yeah…..my bet’s on Lex = arctic wolf

~Miranda

OMG you updated! Your story is so fascinating and gorgeous! update soon please? -puppy eyes- xD ^_^

Loving this story. Please, I beg you to continue. Please let me know when the new chapter is up.

please plaese new chapter

This story is great, I absolutely LOVE it! Please, please, please, update soon, or I'll perish, and die, and bite all my nails off...!

What an adorable story. It's so nice that the dominants are simply caring and gentle towards submissives, guess I've read too many of those master/slave stories with the masters being self-centered with a cruel streak.. but your story is sort of refreshing. I love the world you've created, and the atmosphere too. Please don't abandon this story!

If there is anything to criticize.. you have a tendency of repeating scenes from different perspectives, and sometimes it seems a bit unnecessary. That's my only criticism for you. Wish you found a way around it somehow. But I do get that's your style of writing and it's not the end of the world, I'll still keep reading.

Just amazing. Very great plot and story. Characters are quite fabulous as well. I'm surprised I haven't reviewed before. Anyway, just a little bit of praise from a passing cheerleader. Only one request, don't abandon the story. I've seen so many good ones go down to abandonment, and, since I like this one so much, I'm really hoping you continue updating (at your own speed, of course)

OMG i am totally loving ur story, it is just too cute and well hot! =D well i'm not so good with plots, grammer and writing so im just going to say More please! You are an awesome writer!!! xD

Awww... Now I really, really want to know what'll happen next!

I could swear that I had reviewed this story, but for the life of me I can't remember if I did or not. It's one of those things that you think about doing so much that you end up actually thinking you did it ^^' I looked but I didn't see a review from myself,l so I'm writting one now hehe.

Lex is really a character, and possibly a pent up nudest lol. I could see him turning into a hawk or wolf. Those are just my opinions though; It mostly stems from the thought that he wants his freedom:flight, is protective (of his brother):wolf, and has the characteristics of a fighter:Both. I find him really interesting and greatly amuzeing (mostly due to this chapter) :D

I really can't wait to see what he trys next, until then! ~Passing Reader