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Yeah !!! An update !!! So happy ! You made my day !

hello thank you so much for your update, I really really love your story, are you from germany too, have a great great holiday and please update soon (puppy eyes)

hai....new reader here...the moment i am finish read your story i become addicted to your story....i can waited to read when lucion know about lex true self...hehehe...i will be quite amazing story...but...please updated your story ASAP......i really want to read the updated....thanks for share....

Ah, I was so happy to see the update, and the chapter was great fun! Thank you, and please try to update a gain just a LITTLE bit sooner, huh? ;o)

OMG!! I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT. Please please please update soon I want to know whats going to happen next, this story is so amazing...not to mention I have been laughing my ass off. lol. AS soon as you get the chance please update and I shall wait patientely. Ja Mata Misawo

*squee* you updated!!! Unfortunately, all that did was whet my appetite for more...

oh update! Yes!!! Thank you. I don't review much, but I love this story. I especially like how the "submissive" is all feisty and independent. :-)

Imagine my glee when I saw chapter 9!

Take about a deer caught in the headlights! Standing there in front of all those dominants in his birthday suit. Can Lex say, "Oh crap!" Lex staring at the dominants, dominants staring at Lex. It took the red headed kid yelling for Lucian to break the spell. And Lex is off and running with an upset dominant hot on his heels.

What was Lex thinking of jumping from balcony to balcony. Guess desperation makes one do deperate things. Lucien has his hands full with that one.

Lex's overconfidence did him in. Now he's in Lucien's possession once again. And Lex's submissive side made a tentative emergence. And how quickly Lex squashed it. Yeh, going to be a looong battle of wills between those two.

So, the dragons have their own hospital for the Ri's. Well, it does make sense. A human hospital would cause a lot of problems if not panic. Which brings me to ask, DO humans know of the existence of these dragons or just a select few, like the hunters?

Please don't take too long for the next chapter.

Wow I just found this story and I really love it. It's really cute and I love the way that Crescent acts around Lex. I can't wait for the dramatic realisation that Lex can speak! Hmm, what else...? Well, to make this a rounded review, my only criticism would be that sometimes when you switch to someone else's POV you tell us all over again what has just happened, except from a different POV, which is a bit tedious. Instead I would work on making it clear to the reader, if not the other characters in the story, how the character is feeling without having to switch to another POV. That would be cool. I think your idea is really fun. And I love Angel! He was so cute! Anywho, if you do email alerts then I would really apreciate it if you emailed me when you updated, or else I might lose this story (I hate it when that happens!). My address is mypheonixfire@hotmail.com

~Kati-chan

Hmm, I like it. =)
Can't wait for the big revelation of just how clever our dear Ri really is. XD