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by arimi

person MiraMira
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....you know how Indians have the Rain Dance? Well I wish there was a pixilated version that could serve as an Update Dance.....I wonder what it would look like....?

Wow. Sorry about this, I'm kinda in zombie mode. It's 153am here right now, and I"m not one of those night owl people in the slightest, heck, I think it's wierd to wake up after sunrise. .... that just to say that I'm tired and that's the reason for my randomness.

I just got addicted to this other fic and was like "oh, I should check up on Independence and pay my dues."


Ah, I gotta say this though. I was kinda sad that you didn't write a dirty afair letter response. I dunno, maybe I just hang out with too many wierd people so my sense of humor's skewed (sp?), but I had fun writing that review...hmmm, yup, definitely wierd.

Anyways, I'm gunna get some sleep before I start telling you things like how I accidentally scared a homeless guy because of magical worlds and shit like that that make no sense to anyone who wasn't there. Ugh, i talk to much when I'm dead. Why?

Your loyal zombie slave
Miranda
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good! Loving it, update? pretty please!
person MiraMira
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohmigoshohmigoshohmigosh!!

AN UPDATE! *dies*

Finals be damned, I,m glad I checked back here! Kyaa~

Thank-you thank-you thank-you~!

still love ya lots!
Miranda
person dutsada
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seriously... I love this story.. LOL...I cant remember telling you that but i'd like to say it again.. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!


I like the last bit.. its so sweet..
person Coobs
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow love this story!! hope u update soon!! :P
person Lina
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Awesome story, are u gonna update soon!? I really hope so its amazong
person bahaqueen
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo....... don't stop there!!!! Lovin' it, but its getting to be torturous between updates
person Kerry
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting premise for a story! I am enjoying how different this is from the rest. Props for originality! Can't wait for the update.
Thank you!

Cheers.
person kerry
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for reccomending Tentacles for the Brides Bouquet by kiix. I had already read The Last Pure Human by TwistedHilarity and thought that if you liked the TLPH as much as I did, than Tentacles would be pretty good too. Glad I checked it out!

Btw, when you have a free moment, you might want to check out 'I Was An Alien Cat Toy' by Ann Sommerville. The main premise is similar to that of TLPH. The author also has other really good stories, namely the Darshian Tales.

Anyway, can't wait for you to update. Hope you get around to reading I Was An Alien Cat Toy!
person kynthos
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so ecstatic you have finally updated. Yay. Don't worry bout the lateness. Most important thing is tat you did not abandon this one of a kind story (my fav story). Love you for it. Thanks for the update. Please keep up the good work.

P/S: I believe we are from the same country then. I have labour day on 1st May 2009 too. Hehe.