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by arimi

person MiraMira
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*curls into ball on floor and cries*
person MiraMira
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, ok, so I just went back and counted how many times I had reviewed Independence. Only 19, well this is 20, can you believe that? It seems like so much more to me. I dunno, maybe it's because I check it so often. Well, whatever. Maybe instead of begging you for updates I should work on a plot of my own. I'm scrapping the one I have up (cuz it's total crap) and want to start a different original....hmmm. anyways, that's all

You're loyal fan,
Miranda
person MiraMira
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*stares at chapter listing* It will change. It will change. It will change.


your loyal fan
Miranda
person MiraMira
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey hey!

me again. I kinda want to just review every day, i mean, i check it often enough, so why not? I mean,i don't want to run out of things to say and get redundant or anything.....I guess I'll just review when i have something to say.

Oh! if you have the time, try reading Soundless on fictionpress dot net. OMG, I'm loving it. I'm on ch 23 of 30 and it's just freaking amazing. Anyways, just thought you might have writers block and want to read instead so....just my humble suggestion. Mind reading fics and anthropomorphic fics just have a special place in my heart.

Well, i have to finish reading a ch of biotech before lecture, so I'll review you again later!



Love ya lots still!
Ever your loyal fan,
Miranda
person MiraMira
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I had a freak of a week and was kinda hoping your story would show up to makes things better.

your loyal fan,
miranda
person MiraMira
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm getting a bit delerious when I check your fic now. I mean, I get so amped up every time I go to check on it that I immediately think "omgomg the chapters list looks longer!---oh. still 9...*runs off crying*"

Yeah....anyways, just wanted to let you know that I check for updates way more often than I leave reviews. I usually check it at LEAST 2 times a day.

I encourage you to dedicate a weekend or maybe just an hour here and there to the story :)
person MiraMira
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heya! Me again :]



WARNING: THIS POST WAS INTENDED TO BE A JOKE/PUN AND SWITCH THINGS UP FROM THE WAY I'D BEEN REVIEWING THUS FAR. IT WAS IN NO WAY MEANT TO NAG OR BERATE YOU FOR YOUR UPDATE TIMELINE. NEVER TAKE ANYTHING I SAY SERIOUSLY. I'M JUST A FACETIOUS LITTLE BITCH. ;)



Hey, 'Me.
I have a confession: I've been cheating on you.

You're a great person and all, but a girl's got needs she has to have fulfilled, and if you're not gunna fulfill them, then can you really blame me for going to someone else who will? It's not my fault! Every time I come to Independence and get turned away with no new updates I go to check out The Last Pure Human, what with it's sexy cat-men and innocently brave little uke. Look. It's nothing personal. If you decide somewhere down the road that you want to have a mind-blowing make up session--maybe you can bring a double feature (if you're up for it, I know I am ;] ) and I'll shower you with reviews of praise and love--I'm all for it anytime you are. But you can't just expect a girl to wait around forever and be ok with being permanently cock-blocked. Just thought I should let you know the deal. You know what you have to do if you want to change it.

You're ever loyal (though not completely faithful) fan,
~Miranda



PS. Um, any chance you could at least update your recommended reading section so we'd have something new to read? Oh, and I may be cheating on you, but Google's New Tab page still recognizes you as my #2 most visited site (#1's Pandora). Still love you lots and lots!
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE another chapter *puppy eyes*
person MiraMira
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*does update dance* woowooupdatewoowooupdate~~ *sings and dances like an idiot*

hmmmm, how can we help you? I tried offering smexy twins to give you some inspiration....Do you need someone to bounce your ideas off of? (or to kick your ass into gear when you have time to write but feel lazy? [DISCLAIMER: I IN NO WAY MEAN THAT AS AN INSULT, that's just usually how it is for me. I get an idea that I REALLY want to write about, but I don't know how to finish it and I can't talk it over with my friends cuz they're all either homophobes or gay themselves--either way making it too dangerous/awkward to talk about--so random people on line help me and my muse]).

Anywho, I'm pretty sure I'm gunna cry if I don't find out what.....ohmygod I forgot the main character's name....I've forgotten all their names....uh.....short name....one syllable...I think...uh, two sylablles maybe? Oh shit! Nooooo!!!! This means it's been much too long! Ahhhh! Now I have to re-read your story to repent for forgetting *runs away in shame*

But I think I'm gunna cry if I don't find out what _?_'s animal form is soon. Sad thing is that I don't think that'll be coming up in the plot anytime soon. *sighs*



Still your loyal fan,
Miranda
person MiraMira
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lex and Lucien
Angel and Edward


ok, whoo.



And I still say Lex acts more like a wolf than a cat (badass cat or not). he's just always growls at people. Cats just don't do that. Long live the wolf theory. YAH!



(And what's up with me being the only commenter in the last month. Come on people, pick it up. Betrayed? Where are you~?! *cries alone with an abandoned story*)

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