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Really? I thought the flow was good. I really enjoyed being able to read both perspectives, especially Lucien's. Sounds like they've found their soulmates ^___^. Really anticipating the fight between Reeves and Lucien now.

*giggles* Oh my god, in the nude in front of 24 dominants who want to jump his bones. Lucien will not be happy. But it's so cute how Lex has Lucien utterly whipped without even trying.

Aww, that is just soooo freaking cute!!! I can just imagine all the dopey grins the dominants wear when they look at their mates. I wish updates were faster *begs shamelessly*

Ahh, really want them to start talking. Would totally blow his cover, but I'd love to see Lucien's reaction when he finds out his little one understood everything he was saying before this. And can read, write and speak the language. And think for himself XDXD.... Please update soon!! ^______^

Thank you for this update. Really appreciate it. How could any of us ever give up on you and this fantastic story. See I am still sticking around. And will stick around till this finishes :)

I truely love this fic of yours. It's really hilarious how completely different page they are. And I'm looking forward to read when and how they're going to solve all those little problems, which are definitely going to pop up. It's quite a mix-up you've cooked. Brilliant story! Please, update soon. =)

Awesome story so far! I really enjoy reading it. :D Keep it up!

Aw, such a good story! But I miss the *ehm* action in it. ;) ;) ;) I'm sure that this will be awesome if you just keep struggling! :D

I am totally hooked on your story. Lex's brother sounds so adorable, I guess since no has said the look alike they must be fraternal twins. I definately think there is something very special about Lex. I am going to guess that he is some sort of leader for the subs and its his destiny to mate with the leader of the doms and rule the world...or something like that.

I also put you story on rec list.

OMG, I'm LOVING this. This is sooo much fun. I've been yelling at the characters through most of the chapters and biting my nails in suspense. Lex has a very strong presence and I really enjoy his character. I was mad at him for going back to the island at 'that time of year', even though he claimed he didn't know. He should have at least known it was the fourth year and I totally understand why he went if it was to get Angel off the island but still, dude should have planned this and gone last year. He's also driving me nuts with his ill-thought-out escape attempts. And I know that's been waaay too hard on him because I'm pretty sure he's never had to plan an escape attempt in his life and it's not like he has the time or resources to come up with a good one. Escape attempts are a gamble anyway. Usually your first attempt better be a damn good one because once you've made an escape attempt and failed 'they' know you'll try to escape and beef up security. But waiting can be just as bad: He didn't know the collars were coming and those damn things will made escape soo much harder. I still think he pretty much blew it with his first escape attempt at Lucien's place. Lucien will be watching him more carefully now.

There's so much you can do with the world you've created and I hope you give us one hell of an adventure. And I'm really REALLY hoping Lucien won't find out about Lex for a loooong time, maybe when Lex has stolen one of Lucien's fancy cars and is tearing through the city at 120mph after having kidnapped Angel and Lucien looks up and sees Lex on the news in a high speed police chase. lol Speaking of which, I was mad at Lucien for chasing Lex. Lex was on his property, there was no where for him to go. By chasing Lex, he made Lex run and panic and THAT'S why Lex got hurt. Stupid Ro.

A couple things I wanted to talk about, please don't kill me. First I sat there and wondered if Ri's have to shave. Then I decided they don't cuz they're submissive dragons and that's that. I was kinda annoyed at first that Lex didn't notice he was naked (There are alllllll these stories on this site where a girl's shirt pops open and she 'doesn't notice' and I'm like, how the f*ck do you not notice you're shirt popped open and you're boobs are hanging out). That's stupid. You're gonna know if you're naked or not . . . except if you're a Ri, I figured they're used to being naked, being naked is so natural Lex probably WOULDN'T notice right away. I'm also guessing Lex's animal form is a panther. Because everyone does panther for animal form. It's cliche . . . but its cool so I don't even care. So the one complaint I have is completely irrelevant: That line about 'he's a mystery, an enigma, a puzzle to be solved' is so cliche I could just barf. Everyone does that line and it annoys me more each time. That's a personal beef though, so ignore me, it has nothing to do with you.

Anyway, the story is gorgeous. Please keep up the good work. My mouth is watering. I want more sooooo bad. Please please please.