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for Independence

by arimi

person ImPatietlyWaiting
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please update! I love this story sooooo much.
person kristina
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a clever idea to have leather be the type of clothing material that doms have when they shapeshift to human form. It makes sense as it is made from skin/hide. Great idea!
person kristina
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I've loved this story forever, so I decided to reread it again, and I was delighted to see that you had added a chap since I had last done so. Although i'm slightly mad at myself for somehow missing the update when it happened, i'm glad i found it! And i just loved it too.
Here's hopin for more! :-)
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
write more please *puppy eyes* ................ HAPPY NEW YEAR!
person SERICITE
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!
person Toodles
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lex is going to start a Ri-sistance! And they are going to Ri-volt and get their Ri-venge! And they will call themselves "The Ri-Tards" Sorry! Sorry! ROFLMAO!! Sorry, omg, I'm laughing sooo hard right now. I couldn't help it. I'm not making fun of the story. The story is excellent and I LOVE it. It's just that I started doing "Ri" words in my head (Resilience, Respect, Recuperate) and that just popped out of my mouth and I laughed until I cried.

Love the story so very much.
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I cannot wait for the next update. Please update soon!!!!!
person Zykaite
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I lost the link to your story and only found it again today, which is why I'm only reviewing now....
Anyway, great chapter(s)! Lucien and Lex are adorable, especially since Lucien is so obviously smitten :P. I can't wait until Lucien finds out Lex can talk (And I wish I could see his expression lol)!
Potty training... is that some foreshadowing I see? Hmmmm??? *imagining Lucien trying to POTTY TRAIN Lex*
*drops ded*
Hehe, anyway, you know the drill -- great story, loved it, hope you update soon!
P.s. Any hopes for a potty training (or equally embarrassing) scene...? *hint hint*
person cirrus74
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Somehow the only thing I could think about was how funny it was that dominants got to keep their clothes and submissives didn't. I like Lex ^____^ and I think Lucien probably like him too.
person cirrus74
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mm, yummy chapter. You're certainly good at building up the anticipation. Looking forward to them meeting.