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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, loving the story so far =D ... I don't know if anyone has pointed this out (yes I could read through all the reviews to find out but.. well there's hundreds..^-^) anyhoodle there is a bit at the start of chapter two which I believe goes like this:
"Dragon Country was divided into eight states with seven states ruled by the seven different dragon clans and the eight run by the high council of dragons. The eight state surrounded on all sides by the other seven states made it the very center and heart of Dragon Country."
It took me several reads to figure out what this meant, maybe it's just me and I'm a bit slow but I kept reading it as if there was seven states run by seven dragon clans and eight states run by the high council of dragons, so that altogether there was a total of 15 states. I'm guessing that you mean there are Eight states, seven of which are run by individual dragon clans and the eighth is run by the high council. What you're trying to explain would be understood more clearly if you changed all the words 'eight' (except for the very first) to 'eighth'.
... and after re-reading my rant I've realized how unclear I was ^-^; ... anyway keep up the good work! =D
"Dragon Country was divided into eight states with seven states ruled by the seven different dragon clans and the eight run by the high council of dragons. The eight state surrounded on all sides by the other seven states made it the very center and heart of Dragon Country."
It took me several reads to figure out what this meant, maybe it's just me and I'm a bit slow but I kept reading it as if there was seven states run by seven dragon clans and eight states run by the high council of dragons, so that altogether there was a total of 15 states. I'm guessing that you mean there are Eight states, seven of which are run by individual dragon clans and the eighth is run by the high council. What you're trying to explain would be understood more clearly if you changed all the words 'eight' (except for the very first) to 'eighth'.
... and after re-reading my rant I've realized how unclear I was ^-^; ... anyway keep up the good work! =D
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I just enjoy this to bits. I like the sexual tension, and I really like the added mystery of what, exactly, our little unusual boy is, considering how the other Ri acted towards him. It's made me excited to find out what happens next. Looking forward to the next update.
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!! I'm SO glad you didn't abandon this story. I absolutely LOVE it and can't wait till you update again.
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
plz i wanna know wuts gonna happen plz post another five chapter
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I'm really anxious for the "big reveal" and to see how Lucian will react. And wondering how far Lex will let things go before it gets to that point. I really want him to run away again and have Lucian catch him trying to sneak back into the mansion where Angel is being kept, or something. Or have Lucian hear him talking and realize that he is hiding things but not let Lex know that he knows right away, or, hmm... so many interesting possibilities.
I also like that you are starting to develop the story so that there is more going on than just the tension that comes from the Ros not knowing who Lex is. I know from experience that it's easy to write UST but harder sometimes to keep things going once that initial tension is resolved, but with this story I feel like there is enough going on that the plot will keep going after that point. Good luck, and I will be waiting for later chapters!
I also like that you are starting to develop the story so that there is more going on than just the tension that comes from the Ros not knowing who Lex is. I know from experience that it's easy to write UST but harder sometimes to keep things going once that initial tension is resolved, but with this story I feel like there is enough going on that the plot will keep going after that point. Good luck, and I will be waiting for later chapters!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I almost couldn't believe my eyes!
Reading about Crescent telling of his yearning for his mate TO his mate made me wonder if or when he finds out that Lex had been living almost right under his nose what his reaction would be. Would he be mad? What if Lex had succeeded in escaping with his brother? Then Crescent would have never found his mate for like ever! Hahahaha! Keeps my brain stimulated thinking up all these scenarios! Can't wait to read about Lex's next escape plan and can't help wondering will he succeed now? And what if he does? How crazy is Crescent going to be or get?
Please update againg SOON!
Reading about Crescent telling of his yearning for his mate TO his mate made me wonder if or when he finds out that Lex had been living almost right under his nose what his reaction would be. Would he be mad? What if Lex had succeeded in escaping with his brother? Then Crescent would have never found his mate for like ever! Hahahaha! Keeps my brain stimulated thinking up all these scenarios! Can't wait to read about Lex's next escape plan and can't help wondering will he succeed now? And what if he does? How crazy is Crescent going to be or get?
Please update againg SOON!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi hun, glad to see you back! ;-) Lovely chapter, as usual, abit short but enough for progress in between. I really like about the idea of chosen one, struggling for independence. Lex will be the prophet among all submissives, and he will be a cranky one, lol. Now that you finally break the block, please keep on writing, don't let us your loyal fan down. Love love love you so so much!
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I'm thrilled that you've updated. But the pace - i have to say - has been extreeeeeemely slow. When will Lex's ability to talk be known???
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
new fan, love the story
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a very good surprise I had yesterday!
I loved the chapter. Lex still wants to escape, but I am guessing that when he will find his brother, Angel will be happy and will not want to follow him. Poor Lex!
I really wonder how and when Lucien will discover that Lex can talk ans otherwise be different from other Ri.(You may take this as a subtil hint on how much eager I am for your your udates :))
Anyway it is well worth the wait.
Bye
M
I loved the chapter. Lex still wants to escape, but I am guessing that when he will find his brother, Angel will be happy and will not want to follow him. Poor Lex!
I really wonder how and when Lucien will discover that Lex can talk ans otherwise be different from other Ri.(You may take this as a subtil hint on how much eager I am for your your udates :))
Anyway it is well worth the wait.
Bye
M