rate_review Reviews

New reader here! ^_^
Really enjoying the story so far, the pacing has been good and the characters....What can I say, hurrah for a bottom with a bit of backbone?
Loving Lex's internal monologues XD And the side characters (Matthew and Reeves and Edward and all the other Ro's) are great too ^^

PS. Hope you update soon! =D

I love this story. Please please please please update soon!!!

I'm not sure if I have reviewed this story before or not but I have been reading it and really enjoying it. I love little Lex talk about downright adorable I can just see him glaring at Lucian just so sweet and Lucian being so overcome by finding his little mate that he doesn't even really see it. I loved the viewing towards the beginning that was so wow gotta admit it. And the chase had me laughing and giggling crazy. The last chapter had me wanting to find a huge hot coffee pot and pour it over his exe. bosses head the jerk. You are doing a really very good job on this story and I sincerely hope you continue with it because I find it wonderfully interesting. I do have a story that I just love to read over and over you might like it it's called Pure Life by shadelostwolf you might try reading it. Thank you for sharing your story and imagination.

I WILL REVIEW.
i can't believe i missed so many chapters. stupid aff for not having an alert function... (at least i think it doesn't?)
anyway, the chapter... well i've already nagged you about the commas, but aside from that, it's good? except for the fact that at the end of chap 11 i was all 'hah i get to find out what happens next' and then chapter 12 turns out to be an interlude...
but still, it's good to find out what lex used to work as. errand boy LOL (poor him). and here i had been imagining something glamorous like some top-secret government agent or something :P
and his friends probably still think he's off sipping margaritas on a tropical island where there's no cell reception... hehe
...okay, i'll stop talking now. i'll just end with the obligatory 'update soon' (AND TELL ME WHEN YOU DO)

oh, and on a random note, that's a lot of reviews (i will help add to the review count... when i remember...)
i also just rated your story a five :)
and on an even more random note, those aff anti-spam image thingies are SO HARD TO READ.
review deterrent, i call it -.-
UPDATE SOON.

Noooo ! I don't care about Lex life before ! *sigh*
You're a little tease ! XD
Lex and Lucian were all wet and hot and something... ;)
And you leave us like that !! XDDD
But... You keep your promise of an update ! You made my day !

I really hope we're not going to have to wait for months for the next one ?!
Please pretty, update soon... ^^

I'm not gonna lie this chapter confused me, it seems like your writing for a whole different story...and i had imagined a totally different setting, one without computers and a world just generally less modern.... I'm having a hard time fitting this in with the rest of the story...how old is lex.before I thought he was like 16 now he could be like 25...

i looooooveee black panthers!!!!! they are my favorite animals!! just story just went to the top of my list now. ... if only it would update more often..

I am quite happy I found this story. =D No one else was updating [that I enjoyed anyways] and I found this little jem. I am very pleased :)

You are doing a lot of explainning, which I usually just skim over, it is done decently but can be long. Maybe find a way in encorporating it into the plot more effecently? currently it seems like its: PLOT PLOT PLOT - excerpt / infor -- PLOT - ecerpt / info PLOT PLOT.

I do enjoy the plot and the characters right now though :) update soon please :)

please please please dont make us wait forever for the next one