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by arimi

schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your updates!!
person ashley
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude! I'm dying! I want him to speak so badly! I'm waiting for it! I think it would be great if he spoke the first time they had sex or something. Cant wait for you to update! Love the story!
person wynja
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lex should give in o those urges... and damn all those people for interupting! ;) oh, but why is ANgel so sad?! Poor thing I wanna know...

Byt he way, something strange seems to have happed with the spacing of this chapter; there were a LOT of space... ;)
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa you can't leave it here!!! Please hurry with the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens. When will Lex let them in on his little secret???
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa you can't leave it here!!! Please hurry with the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens. When will Lex let them in on his little secret???
person Somnium
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, but the pace really needs to be picked up. And Lex needs to start speaking. This is getting ridiculous. But please keep updating!
person Fan of yours
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAY!!! An update! I hope this means that you're going to be updating consistently (i.e. at least once a month). *puppy dog eyes* Of course, more than once a month would be freaking awesome, but I know you're probably quite busy with RL, so I'll be content with what I can get, and as long as you promise not to abandon the story. :D

I absolutely loved this chapter, and I think the mushiness was juuuuuust right. ; ) Not too much and not too little. LOL. Lucien's such a sweetheart and like Lex, I'm torn because I value independence and free will, but I hate the thought of hurting Lucien (by Lex running away). If Lucien was an arrogant, abusive asshole, then I would have no problems with hurting him (I would take pleasure doing so), but Lucien is just so sweet (I'm getting cavities, but I'm not complaining LOL). He's like a big teddy bear that I want to hug and cuddle with. XD

I have no clue what is going to happen next in this story, and I love that! This story is not predictable at all, which makes it such a pleasure to read. I tend to re-read the story over and over while I'm waiting for an update, it's that good. Kudos to you good author. ; )

I can't wait to find out what happened to Angel. I'm guessing he was so distraught at being separated from Lex and being stuck with some guy he doesn't know that he probably wouldn't stop crying or something, which prompted Goldwind to bring Angel to Lex. It'll be interesting to see how that will play out. I don't think Angel was this upset when Lex left the island all those years ago, so it might have something more to do with being stuck with Goldwind. LOL. Goldwind better watch out. Lex might attack him if he thinks he did something to Angel.

Thank you for the update. I will anxiously wait for the next chapter, so until next time. Cheers. : )
person MissMiki
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! not too mushy at all :) loved the update! there seems to be a lot of excess spacing in your chapter though-not sure if that was intentional or not.
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. So you gonna update anytime soon *nudgenudge*. Please don't stop writing this story. I love that it is about dragons. Independence is very unique and I for one would be very sad to not read more. Please don't leave us hanging. When is Lex gonna see Angel again. Will he ever make it back to his human life. Will he ever submit to Lucien? Or better yet, when will he speak to him? I'm rather excited and anticipatory to learn what their first exchange with dialogue will be about?
person betrayed
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey :) sorry for missing last week but im here now better late than never right? anyways wowww youre planning on finishing a WHOLE chapter in one month??? well now its in like a week but same thing :P im impressed! Its newww record ladies and gentlemennn! :P well ill be waiting <3 betrayed